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Open Poetry #12

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Essencesofdreams
New Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 4

0 posted 2001-01-24 12:17 PM

Roses are red violets are blue we were
once together like roses in bloom.

Roses Wilt and Roses die without your
love is like a sun with no sky.

The Sun turns to Moon with every sigh
Everytime I think of you I start to cry.

As i cry Each day I relize I should
of kept you by my side.

When I dream of you here with me
I think of what we could'a been

All is lost,Lost is allI broke your
heart and now your gone.

Ashes to Ashes dust to dust
What I have done Is A sudden rush

Feelings Rush Back Like A Roaring Flood
Ill Win you back no matter what.

"Life Without dreams is no life at all"

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2001-01-24 12:41 PM

Sometimes when the Rose's are in full bloom and all is happy, it's hard to see things clearly until they are gone. Very nice writing.

EroseGrover
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

2 posted 2001-01-24 07:04 PM

Very Nice Poem has alot of self expersion In it keep up the lovely work.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2001-01-24 08:03 PM

Essencesofdreams reminds me that we don't know what we've got till it's gone. Very well done
Rich

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