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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-23 09:21 PM


Another Little Ditty

deeds
simple deeds
give one away
to someone in need

needs
little needs
take one away
in a good deed

time
sharing time
just with one
calling him mine

mine
sharing mine
those in need
call him very kind

love
loving mine
fills my needs
with his good deeds
each and every little time


01.23.01


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-23 09:26 PM


Very pretty, Karilea!

Denise

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2 posted 2001-01-23 09:32 PM


A pretty ditty.  Love it.  

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3 posted 2001-01-24 03:40 AM


even when you write brief - you write true - and beautiful
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4 posted 2001-02-09 09:58 PM


A gem found!! Lovely little poem.  
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5 posted 2001-02-10 08:15 AM


Thank you for the dusting off, PdV!...
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6 posted 2001-02-20 09:20 PM


a gem found!pretty little poem!

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7 posted 2001-02-20 10:23 PM


An itty bitty witty little pretty ditty...
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8 posted 2001-02-20 10:26 PM


Cute and pure!
And just itself!

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9 posted 2001-02-20 10:29 PM


Ah..nice sum up at the end. It was quite ellectric

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