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Missing the Words |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Have you ever missed the words when the one you love is talking been so entranced by the sound or the beauty of the face in motion Have you ever lost your thought at the wisdom that you're hearing thought only of your luck at being loved by one endearing If you're hearing words of love as your loved one speaks so softly can you concentrate on content or just how you feel warmly If you're faced with bared flesh glowing or eyes sparkling with love's dewdrops If the touch you feel is burning Do you pull out all the stops Or do you react as I do saving rational till last give yourself into the moment know the afterglow holds fast Know in those after moments you can speak with cogent tongue or is your control so fix-ed you can let words always run My loved one's loved with desperation she is everything to me she's part of every cogitation she fills my heart with glee Every move and every gesture Every word from out her throat Every flash of eye, each texture Every way she does emote For love's more than passing fancy more than dancing under stars more than standing in the shore's swells more than flying off to Mars She stretches to Omega - she's my zenith my infinity before time was she is my life That's how I hear her - see? Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
wilfred, u have it down to a T...its amazing how everything fades out and your in a dream when face to face with that special person...you express this feeling excellently...thanks for the read lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ I think they call it mesmerized ...! And that's what your thoughts did for me ! Nicely portrayed emotion. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I know what you mean billy..lovely write from you..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh yes, yes, yes! Lovely the way you can capture these perfect moments in life! Corinne |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow, I could see every movement, and imagine every look...very well done, Mr. Yeats... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill.. "Have you ever missed the words when the one you love is talking been so entranced by the sound or the beauty of the face in motion" yes, yes and yes...Loved this poem, my friend...and it is so true of love. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Wilfred! Very lovely!! Denise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...I just hope she knows how lucky she is |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Wandering= Sometimes my muse is good to me - thank you Marge - When I get a response from you - I feel I can get no higher compliment here - thank you Victoria- Thank you Poetess of color thank you so much Corinne- And you're another like Marge - a supreme compliment - thank you Karilea- you affirm what I hoped and suspected -Others respond to love as I do Thank you Martie - It is curious - but this level of love reaction - is as new to me as my coming to PIP - thank you Denise- when I please - I am pleased - thank you Paula- I believe she does ~G~ Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can I just ditto Marge and Martie? *G* For they gave voice to my feelings... this is wonderful! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ lovely write my friend.... be well.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wilfred, amazing! you mixed tenses and made the love sound so desirable. Although if someone told me I was their zenith when I spoke I would never shut up!  write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
suthern- Sure - my head's pretty well swelled already -~G~ - Thank you GreenEyes - You too - are so wonderful for my ego - thank you Kethry - Don't know why I missed that in proofing - but I'll fix it - if I repost i'll give you credit Thanhks - |
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