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vandana
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0 posted 2001-01-23 06:03 PM



I would,
If I say I love you,
Would you love me,
If I would say
how much I love you
Would do anything for you,
In this world,
Let the stars shine
above
cause I would love you
more than you know,
I would take you
In my arms
And never let you go,
I would give
these arms to love you,
Dark clouds above the skies,
I would say
I love you,
When youwould be mine forever,
I would go anywhere
In this world
And be there with you
all the time,
I would make you smile
when I say these words to you,
I would take you
In my arms,
Keep you warm and tender,
I would say I do
And care for you,
I would take you
In my arms,
I would take your heart away,
If I love you,
If I would  let you see there
Is love In my heart that cares,

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-01-23 06:26 PM


Very nice work, and I hope you go for it, and get back what you deserve.
Sandra

Mr.Magoo
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since 2001-01-20
Posts 104

2 posted 2001-01-23 08:59 PM


Very nice write and congrats on your 1000
(a bit in advance).
I hope all works out for you.
Once again Very Nice.
                  Mr.Magoo

Denise
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3 posted 2001-01-23 09:29 PM


Very beautiful, Vandana! Lovely, lovely!

Denise

vandana
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4 posted 2001-02-02 10:29 AM


thank you all
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