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It's Her TIme.........
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It's Her TIme......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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She let her hair down In cascading waves of amber light Another day behind her She embraces the night With chores finished ~ tasks completed kids tucked neatly into bed now is the time she can let out the emotions running 'round in her head So much happening lately Her only time to stop and think She needs to find paper…………… Pen and ink To her favorite spot, Settled in with a cup of tea She relaxes………….. And let's her mind be free From her heart and ink well A peaceful river flows ~The moment of inspiration Every poet knows~ Effortlessly in rhythm The words make their rhyme In blissful release she is grateful For this, her special time ~SEA~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I know this!!!!!! I have a quilt and a couch and oh yes I know this!!! Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes.... Sea...I recognize these too....wonderful hon, it make me smile reading this one. thanks for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Indeed, yes....this is a special moment for me, reading your work!!! I am so glad you have your special time  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kathleen~ I'm so gald you can relate Charisma~ thank you, I'm happy to make you smile Pepper~ wow, that is so nice of you thank you! -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds like precious time to me sea.. Nicely written..enjoyed HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA-- I like this muchly. And can relate! wonderful write. Poeminister o "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
change the pronouns from feminine to masculine - you could be writing of me - (big big smile here) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Beautifully written expression of a poet's moment. Deep in thoughts as ever as the mind wanders into the web of poetry. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But SEA! I want this...ALL the time...along with being independently wealthy and that long cascading amber hair wouldn't hurt, either... sigh but since that's not to be, I'll just have to put this in my library... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sooooo beautiful, SEA!! I love those moments! Denise |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening SEA, I have read a number of your writings, and have to say that you write very well. I do enjoy these writings of yours. BC |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Sheesh,do I ever know that special time. It dont seem theres ever enough special time for us parents. Yea the time with the kids are special but after a full day with them the word special doesnt really come to mind until their in bed sleeping. Very Nice. Mr.Magoo |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ precious indeed, it isn't very often I get time like this PM~ glad you can relate, thank you, as always, for reading, you make me smile WY~ So glad you can see this could be written for a man just as easily DJD~ Cheers back to ya Sunshine~ Good Grief, so do I!! lol  my hair doesn't exactly cascade either, but it's growing.......oh and when you get to the independently wealthy, tell me how ok? Happy to see it go into your library!Denise~ Thank you!! BC~ thank you for making me smile, I like to read yours too! Mr. Magoo~ hi, and welcome! Yea, it's great spending time with my kids, but I do it all day, so I really look forward to my time. Thanks for reading -SEA |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I couldn't agree more Sea, excellent write just made me relax reading it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ It is indeed such a special time. When my children were small - I would wait until they were tucked in bed for the night and then did most of my writing while soaking in a hot tub of water. I just laughed when I re-read that ... for I still get such inspiration when I immerse myself in the tub. Treat yourself to that special time - for we love the results from you. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sea~ Yes indeed! I adore this, do I ever relate! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Great job Sea. Is the only thing that keeps me sane or at least my version of sanity. Rich |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
SEA - I love these times but they are far and few between. Thanks for reminding me. Frankie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, I love this so serene and peaceful, not like my stuff which is penned at the oddest moments and in the strangest places. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
From her heart and ink well A peaceful river flows ~The moment of inspiration Every poet knows~ Effortlessly in rhythm The words make their rhyme In blissful release she is grateful For this, her special time ================== OH I LOVE THIS POEM ... its now on my list of favs by you... yes..this is how it feels ... and of course ..you KNOW Im gonna ask .. it IS raspberry tea your sipping.. aint it LOL   nectar of the gods and poets great write Sea-gator Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Life gets so hectic (I know!) and poets NEED that time! This captured the moment nicely. |
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