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While We Serene
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While We Serene |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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While We Serene If just for once I could spill pools of thought, not the expected,...or gigged, but this,...this release - across these stained glass spaces. I think about the in-between and there we are, simply whirling, secretly sick underneath. While the decaying taste swims alone, feathering for reconciliation. I swallow hate, swallow hard, to twirl in twos - we are,... simply beaming, secretly bleeding inside. I thought that I could take a dose of society and wash it down with the whirl and beam of you. I thought that eyes invariably told the truth. I curl and stretch, I breathe it deep down to the core, examine it with laboratory eyes. And you want to know you say, of the acidic sounds corroding my skins as we spin here - in esthetic smiles (handmade) by local artisans. See I dance, in steps of two,...I forgive in folds. I can run faster than a liquid trace. Unknown. I am puddles. More,...pools of thought. I am truth. Both scared and brave. Both deafening and silent. -Simply shied tight.- While we - serene- ah! a dream, we are! - we scream. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow....yes, Spitfire, the eyes DO tell the truth...some are more adept to reading the truth...others only want the fallacy... good piece here... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Spitfire, my friend, you've penned the mightiest of your works with this. This is awesome...especially the last stanza. Only stopped in here a moment while running out the door but am very happy I read this. Keep the faith, my friend. jwesley |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~S,...means much that you stopped by. Thank ya. So true what you said there. *Peace you. ~J,...I appreciate you ya know. Thank you. *Peace. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do know the rule? anytime you mention "serene", "serenity" or "blue eyes"-- IT'S ALL ABOUT ME.... lol...love your work, love, hope I haven't missed too much, haven't been around as much. Excellent imagery, as is your trademark. HUGS-n-love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Stunning, SF, love this, what a strong compilation of thoughts. Perfect. Sandra |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
WOW! You burn me with your fire Fire! Love it |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I thought that eyes invariably told the truth. Maybe they're glass eyes...? Peace 'n Hugs chickadee - nice to read you, honestly... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~K, lol! As I was posting this I thought of you. (course I did). Thanks for coming and for what you said. ~S, Hi you! Thanks for reading and for the P word,...are you kidding? Hee. ~I, you still stopping by? I appreciate you.  . Thank you Thank you! ~C, maybe so. Thanks you. *Peace and Love. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
See I dance, in steps of two,...I forgive in folds. I can run faster than a liquid trace. Unknown. I am puddles. More,...pools of thought. I am truth. Both scared and brave. Both deafening and silent. -Simply shied tight.- While we - serene- ah! a dream, we are! - we scream. ===================================== Excellent write and I especially loved the last verse. As some of the others have said, the eyes do tell the truth and the wisdom in this piece leaves much to ponder. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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