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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-23 07:05 AM



Thunderous Thought-O-Graphs
~*Marge Tindal*~

In awesome wonder
The lightning speaks the thunder
We all stand amazed

Visions come to mind
Flashing lights across the sky
Thunder soon follows

Lightning does strike twice
Hear ye, the thunderous roar
Resounds on a flash

Eyes flash with lightning
Smoldering mood is now seen
Burn with thundered green

Visions come to mind
Flashing lights of brilliance
Thunder soon follows

Lightning and thunder
Not one without the other
Marriage of nature

Thunder rolls within
Chasm of earth filled with sound
Thunder resounding



*A compilation of collected thoughts



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-23 07:07 AM


I knew this would be wonderful! Well done...these thoughts will rumble through my head all day!
Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-23 07:19 AM


Oh Marge love these serie of haiku's.....thunder is really an amazing sight...love these thoughts.

((hugs))
Charisma

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3 posted 2001-01-23 07:24 AM


A wondeful collection of thoughts. They flow through like a refreshing storm.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



Robert Joseph
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4 posted 2001-01-23 08:07 AM


Thunder rolls within
Chasm of earth filled with sound
Thunder resounding


Marge, your words bring my mind to my other passion, ''drumming.''

Greatly enjoyed,
Robert Joseph


ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-01-23 08:15 AM


Brilliant Haiku!  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-01-23 08:22 AM


Eyes flash with lightning
Smoldering mood is now seen
Burn with thundered green

******
Thunder rolls within
Chasm of earth filled with sound
Thunder resounding





and I collect your collected thoughts  
very cool Haikus miss margie


Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

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7 posted 2001-01-23 08:40 AM


Margie girl, this is fantastic, truly truly stunning. And those thought o graphs are tres tres bon! Absolutely Fabulous
Take care love
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2001-01-23 11:31 AM


Love the way your mind rolls through the soul.  You knew of course I would love this piece of yours and of course it is to be saved.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-01-23 02:29 PM


Karilea~
Thanks for being here !

Charisma~
Ahhh .. yes, the sights and sounds are awesome.  
Thank you.

EagleOne~
Always, I thank you for your sweet thoughts.

RJ~
YES !
I can 'hear' that !  Thank you.

Ellie~
Thanks so much for coming to read.
I appreciate you.

JanetMarie~
Thank you for sharing that lovely graphic
and your thoughts.

Marsha~
You're a dear to think so.

MarkB~
Yes, my friend -
and it's nice to know I was right !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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Wilfred Yeats
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10 posted 2001-01-23 07:59 PM


it is rare that a poem's title rivals the poem itself for the quality of its inspiration - this one did - Viva la Marge!
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11 posted 2001-01-23 08:43 PM


Great haiku collection, Marge!

Denise

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12 posted 2001-01-23 08:46 PM



Clever Marge and very well penned!    A great series of haiku  

Take care,
Melissa~


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Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-01-23 10:25 PM


Wilfred~
You just say the nicest things !
Thank you.

Denise~
You know I love to do them and always glad
to know you enjoy them.
These were scattered around in different replies
and I tried to tie them up in one BOLT !

Melissa~
I knew you'd like 'em, hon.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


*One special *HUG* coming up !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-01-23 10:36 PM


Me likes your collection.  Love to listen to thunder... love to read wonderful poetry.
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15 posted 2001-01-23 11:41 PM


Margie~
Wonderful thought-o-graph collection, well penned hon  
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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16 posted 2001-01-23 11:53 PM


Marge,
I like these muchly.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato




[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-23-2001).]

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17 posted 2001-01-23 11:57 PM


And can you ever roll 'em...

love ya Sis, dale

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18 posted 2001-01-24 12:08 PM


Mike~
Thanks, love.

Across welkin night
Lightning walks in boots of steel
Thunderous applause


Tracie~
Thank you for being here.
I love your sweet replies.

PoeMinister~
They kind of grow on you, huh ?
Thanks always for your kind remarks.

Lucky~
Just gotta *Hug* you for that clever reply !
You da' best !
~*Marge*~



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19 posted 2001-01-24 12:15 PM


Power of the storm
radiates through my body
I just love the BOOM!



~SEA

Margie Gal, Lovin these storms you have a brewin here
WONDERFUL!!

~SEA

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20 posted 2001-01-24 07:02 AM


Keep writing your wonderful poetry, you have so many friends here.


Kathleen

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-24-2001).]

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21 posted 2001-01-24 07:52 AM


Lightning and thunder
Not one without the other
Marriage of nature

and in marriage..the two shall occasionally strike...thanks for a wonderful poem..

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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22 posted 2001-01-24 08:47 AM


Thundering Typhoons...

Marge, these are wonderful thought-O-graphs!!!

Oh, How well you write... I am constantly immensely awestruck... thunderstruck as well...  

regards,
Sudhir


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23 posted 2001-01-24 09:19 AM


Wow! talking about thunder rolls. lol great poem Marge. I've seen the light..
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24 posted 2001-01-27 02:41 PM


Like Donner und Blitzen... 'Tis an awesome sight..
Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2001-01-27 02:55 PM


SEA~
Thanks for your smile of enjoyment.

Wynter~
Yet, in the 'strike'...the 'thunder' is an awesome role - rolling !

Sudhir~
LOL @ 'thunderstruck' ...
That's fodder for a future thought-shoot !

RoseBud~
Glad you liked.

Nan~
Yes ... and a thunderous sound it is !

*Thanks to each of you for letting me know you enjoy
these little 'Thought-O-Graphs' ...
I'll keep the camera loaded !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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26 posted 2001-01-27 06:06 PM


Marge, these are wonderful! I would ask that you kindly allow us to use these in an upcoming issue of the newsletter - it will feature nature-related poetry with a focus on Haiku. I hope you agree.  
Marge Tindal
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27 posted 2001-01-28 12:00 PM


PoetdeVine~
You know I don't know the word no ...
when it comes to sharing !
Of course ... now that will be a fun, fun issue.
I'm glad to see us covering a wide-range of topics.
Haiku/Senryu/Tanka should be such fun !
Getting anxious already !
~*Marge*~


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