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peppermint35
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0 posted 2001-01-23 01:41 AM


Quietly reflecting
Tenderly musing
Your voice, so vibrant
Your image, so splendid
Locked fast within my heart
Branded in my brain
Nothing else makes sense
Unless you are a part
Exulting in these feelings
Keeping to myself
Basking in the afterglow
You always bring me to
I think I'm almost ready
To share my dream with you

© Copyright 2001 Lavenia Crosley - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2001-01-23 02:10 AM


Oh Pepper.....share share...its worth it...this is lovely
Mr.Magoo
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2 posted 2001-01-23 02:29 AM


Share indeed,
Although I have no idea whom this is to,I say follow your feelings becuase if you dont you`ll always wonder what might have been.
Very Nice write.
                 Mr.Magoo
                

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2001-01-23 05:23 AM


Pepper*
Your poetry has grown so very much...it's a
pleasure to watch and a joy to see the gold
that you are weaving my friend~


You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~


SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-01-23 04:21 PM


These are falling in love words   beautifully done ~ SEA
Pixydust
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5 posted 2001-01-23 04:41 PM


This was beautiful.
"I'm almost ready to share my dream with you"
Loved it! Thanks for sharing.
Pixydust  

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
6 posted 2001-01-23 05:16 PM


wonderful done my friend....its always great to share a dream...love it.

Charisma

peppermint35
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7 posted 2001-01-23 05:32 PM


Paula, okay, okay...I'm working up my courage

Mr. Magoo, thanks for your words

BDC..oh how you put a smile on my face....high praise coming from you!!!

SEA...thank you so much

Pixydust, thanks for reading...and your kind words

Charisma...well, sharing should only make it better, right??? Thank you for reading too

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Victoria
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8 posted 2001-01-23 05:41 PM


Love the poem and the title neighbor HUGS

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2001-01-23 06:23 PM


Pepper, I know this dream, its a beautiful one. I hope it comes true for you.
Sandra

Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-01-23 07:11 PM


Lovely write and feelings expressed in this.  Nicely penned.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


wandering
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11 posted 2001-01-23 07:42 PM


sharing the dream is the ultimate with the ultimate person...I hope it all comes true for you...wanderer

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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