Open Poetry #12 |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Quietly reflecting Tenderly musing Your voice, so vibrant Your image, so splendid Locked fast within my heart Branded in my brain Nothing else makes sense Unless you are a part Exulting in these feelings Keeping to myself Basking in the afterglow You always bring me to I think I'm almost ready To share my dream with you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Pepper.....share share...its worth it...this is lovely |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Share indeed, Although I have no idea whom this is to,I say follow your feelings becuase if you dont you`ll always wonder what might have been. Very Nice write. Mr.Magoo |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pepper* Your poetry has grown so very much...it's a pleasure to watch and a joy to see the gold that you are weaving my friend~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
These are falling in love words beautifully done ~ SEA |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
This was beautiful. "I'm almost ready to share my dream with you" Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Pixydust |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful done my friend....its always great to share a dream...love it. Charisma |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Paula, okay, okay...I'm working up my courage Mr. Magoo, thanks for your words BDC..oh how you put a smile on my face....high praise coming from you!!! SEA...thank you so much Pixydust, thanks for reading...and your kind words Charisma...well, sharing should only make it better, right??? Thank you for reading too Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love the poem and the title neighbor HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Pepper, I know this dream, its a beautiful one. I hope it comes true for you. Sandra |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write and feelings expressed in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
sharing the dream is the ultimate with the ultimate person...I hope it all comes true for you...wanderer lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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