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Desperate Heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 I need you more than I can stand… I need to feel your gentle hand… My body aches to feel your body near… These eyes look every day for you… These lips both whisper “I love you”… I’d sell my soul right now to have you here… I’m desperately in love with you… There’s not a thing that I can do… My heart starts racing when I hear your name… My love is there for all to see… The shame is I don’t know if we will ever fan our spark into a flame… If I could only touch your face… Just once through all this time and space… The walls between would break themselves apart… You’d find the love I keep inside is too much love for me to hide… It’s waiting here… within… my desperate heart… <~>Smiles from Sunny<~> |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
That's what you call baring your heart... nicely written, enjoyed your poetry. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mike ~~~ I thank you, and am glad to see you stopped by for a visit and a read!!  Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guide... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so graceful and so lovely...truly enjoyed the read  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunny1, such a tender plea of heart filled with so much love... My goodness gurl this touches my heart... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Peppermint ~~~ Oh, thank you!! I'm really glad that you came by to visit and read this piece!! ~~~ Coco ~~~ It was meant to touch the heart, and fill your heart with tender smiles!! Good to see you here!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guide... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Sunny, no need to say I understand, but you know I do. Love the photo, the Scottish knight himself.. Sweet and sad and oh so loving. Heres hoping the future is good. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ catalinamoon ~~~ I knew you would see what I saw in this and I am glad that you enjoyed your reading!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guide... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very powerful words my sister of poetry. I too know of the feeling and I am not giving up hope on it one bit and I know that you won't either. Beautifully presented and done with much sincerity. ========================== Nice graphic to go with this piece as well. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, Beautifully written piece here, you are so wonderful, and you picked one heck of a good pic to go with this beauty, hey did you see What women want?  Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Oh, thank you, and never give up on love, I agree! Also, I love the graphic that goes so very well with this poem.....thank you for that, also!! ~~~ Cerenity ~~~ Thank you, too, and yes.....this picture is one of my favorites. Yes I did see "What Women Want".....now I'm going to have to go refresh my memory!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guide... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Sunny...what a wonderful love plea.. wonderful words are spoken....penned with grace and love. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Charisma ~~~ I thank you, dear friend!! I am glad to see you stop by for a read...it's always nice to have you visit!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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