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.....more than a promise..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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more than a promise culmination of dreams come true all vistas ever visited all scenes serene more than a promise a culmination of climaxes all heights of hope attained even faithful fantasies of zeniths reached more than a promise taut tightropes breached cavernous chasms closed frightful fears fallowed tentative tongues untied more than a promise contentment embraced sighs sweetly savored pleasures preferenced graciousness in smiles more than a promise lies in your I love you 01.22.01 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, so very pretty, Karilea! Lovely! Denise |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This was so romanticly beautiful! (sigh) Yes, love is a solemn thing, one that should never go away, forever keeping close together, feeling for each other, with sympathy, unselfishness, and trust! More golden than an average promise! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I LOVE YOU?? Them are three little words that are used to freely sometimes but when spoken with the heart they mean more than any three words ever spoken. (just my thought) Very Nice Mr.Magoo |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"contentment embraced sighs sweetly savored pleasures preferenced graciousness in smiles" Rays of eloquence. beautifully written. Poeminister |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poetry. enjoyed. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, I was all set to pasteNcopy a favorite stanza or two and then when I scrolled back I just couldn't do it as I ended up practically with the whole darn poem... Anyhow, I will say this sweetie, your poem is a spectacular write... *~coco~* |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Lovely from beginning to end  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all very much for taking a moment to read....so glad you enjoyed!.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
more than a promise indeed my friend. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
(THUNK) last line hit the bull's eye, baby! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all, and I especially liked the "Thunk" comment....I have a feeling this will end up as one that will be submitted someday... |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Awwww....that was so sweet. It promises to be loved by all! "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ you have to know I love this and it's headed into my library! So romantic...... -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* what a read...its more than a promise..indeed.....love it. excellent as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all so much...this little poem loves visiting friends' libraries... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You know, I haven't even opened a library yet...maybe I should with this poem, you "thunk"? It is beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, dear, if you haven't yet....now is the time! Warm hugs, and many thanks!... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, soothing and even serene. Bravo!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is as wonderful as all yours are into my library with it. So why did i miss this, because I've been in and out of here this week I suppose. It is utterly truly exceptionally excellant. And yes I love it, pure Kari gold dear heart. Thank you for this treasure Take care love Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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