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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Tonight Tonight I have no words for you it's not that you made me angry NO!! I'm not blue I'm just tangled up in charming lines and you can't tell the truth you think that I'm an easy mark and I have an empty head be careful how you weave those webs for I may chew straight through and you have missed your mark the one that's caught is you |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Grr! Get 'im!  Tell 'im how it is! Good one... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Just when they think they have you, eh? I LOVE this.  Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
*standing up clapping* You tell 'em! Great poem! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh yea!! Love this -SEA |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
A great poem that exposes the double talking lies we are sometimes told...but a tangled web we weave becomes chains...glad to see you can see through it...best always...wanderer lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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