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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-22 08:06 PM



Cinderella's Slipper?

Here is a slipper?
Whose toes won't be cramped in this?
Whose foot is this small?

Poeminister


[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-01-22 08:15 PM


ShoeMan~

ME ! -  ME !
LET IT BE ME !

Delightful, PrincePoeMinister !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-01-22 08:57 PM


Oh, this is beautiful! Yes, I know all about Cinderella, and how I love the whole magic love that develops in the story (sigh). Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-01-22 09:29 PM


questions, he asks now
instead of seeing my soul
he asks questions now

Well done Poeminister...

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4 posted 2001-01-23 08:33 AM


aghhhh....Marge allready fits the slipper...so now I think that you wouldn't believe me if I told you that I was mine.....  

love it poeminister.....to cute

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-01-23 05:15 PM


it's me, can you see
fits my foot delicately
can you see, it's me........

* wonderful PM   -SEA

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6 posted 2001-01-23 08:22 PM


well if i bind my feet real tight, perhaps even i will fit in too..
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7 posted 2001-01-23 09:02 PM


Evening Poeminister,

I believe this is the first writing of yours that I have had the pleasure to read. I read it about five times, and it has much meaning. Well done.

BC


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8 posted 2001-01-23 10:21 PM


ah, she who would walk in Cinderella's slippers,
might she be as sweet?

Enjoyed the trip to the enchanted castle!

VAS
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9 posted 2001-01-23 10:23 PM


Ah, a rose by any other name would smell as sweet...
but what about Cinder Ella's feet?


I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. ;o}

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10 posted 2001-01-24 10:08 PM


Imagine MY surprise at finding this!
If in that slipper I can fit, do you come with it?
~smiling~, sir, ~smiling~


*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



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11 posted 2001-01-24 10:17 PM


It just so happens that I'M missing a shoe...hmmmm....
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