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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-01-22 07:18 PM


The lilt of word in dulcet tone most surely flows yet still ,
I sense the loss of her refrain , the the way her thoughts would spill
onto the page in fragile wisps evoking tranquil scenes ,
of glades that lay in rolling hills among the evergreens

Attuned in subtle ways she graced us each through eyes renewed ,
and eloquently shared with us , here where they might be viewed ,
those visions which inspired all , remembered as a gift.
Was greener that , the grass which called and caused her words to drift ...

away from these admiring eyes that seek familiar name ?
Once more to whisper 'crost that spanse where echoes still fan flames
of leaves alight with Autumn's hue that stirred at her caress .
Where gone this sprite who's words spoke true , allure of Pan's temptress


She did convey idyllic dreams that flowed from pure emotive streams .
In truth was not imagined though , perhaps too late to tell her so .




[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 01-22-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-01-22 07:21 PM


Doc,
Perhaps, but the poem was great.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-01-22 07:23 PM


This is by far one of the most beautiful reads from you that I have been blessed to partake. smiles to ya, Doc...I'm always impressed by your work, but with this one?
I daydream too....lovely...

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3 posted 2001-01-22 07:43 PM


This is beautifully penned, Dr. Moose. I miss her too. As much as I would miss you if you were no longer gracing us with your lovely gift.

Denise

Mike
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4 posted 2001-01-22 11:32 PM


Heck fire... this is one fine poem.

Nan
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5 posted 2001-01-27 01:45 PM


This is beautifully done, Doc... and don't these silly poets know that once we let them in the door, we lock it behind them??..
Mother_Earth
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6 posted 2001-01-27 01:51 PM


Dr Moose, I don't know who the "she" is, but this is one great poem to her.  Really liked it.  Hugs, ME
CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-01-27 01:54 PM


Doc, this poem is full of grace it's just beautiful my friend...

And I ditto Serenity when she states 'this is one of the most beautiful reads' that you have blessed us with...

Sunshine
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8 posted 2001-01-27 01:57 PM


Extremely lovely....
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9 posted 2001-01-27 02:09 PM


love it..beautifully written..and i loved the rhythm Mr. Magoo..

                ~V~


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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10 posted 2001-01-27 02:09 PM


DrMoose~
I have not seen a lovelier write on this day !

The cadence, the lilt, the sincerity of thought -
Within your quill, such grace
If I were the poet, thusly sought -
I'd hurry back to this place~

For myself - I thought immediately of a poetess
that I miss very much.
I shall drop her an e-mail to let her know
that the circle is broken without her.
Thank you for a gentle reminder to reach out again.

*Hugs* for a wonderous write.
~*Marge*~


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Dr.Moose1
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11 posted 2001-01-28 07:46 PM


Well,
What can I say except thanks for the feed-back ? I think I made it as clear as I could without naming names . We have been deprived
of a fantastic influence , and one that is sorely missed .
Doc

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12 posted 2001-01-28 09:02 PM


This is beautiful, Dr. I'm sure she will think so too when she sees it.
Kethry
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13 posted 2001-01-29 03:50 PM


Doc, This is better than a palindromic double acrostic!
write on
Kethry


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Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-02-05 01:16 PM


Filled my mind with many thoughts....

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Martie
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15 posted 2001-02-05 02:45 PM


Doc--This is full of your sweet charm...and beautifully done.
Meadowmuse
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16 posted 2001-02-05 03:56 PM


Never too late, Doc. This is enchanting.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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17 posted 2001-02-05 04:10 PM


Wonderful write. Beautifully articulated.

~Alison~

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