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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2001-01-22 06:14 PM

Thoughtful Man

In vast expanse of the thinking process
beyond what is consciously known
there lies a hope of that which
can never be dreamed or wished…..
only lived through
The Thoughtful Man
standing at the shore of change
pondering this sure-footed existence
on solid ground melting away into
a fluid new world.

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

wandering
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since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

1 posted 2001-01-22 07:14 PM

Robert, this is an excellent poem...it rings true to us thinkers.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

2 posted 2001-01-22 07:23 PM

I've been told by some that I "think too much"; for me, your poem is a perfect statement about what it's like to let your mind just roam free of its boundaries.. to "walk" in a fluid new world. Well done!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-01-22 07:24 PM

Robert- i think you've made me think.... i think... *wink*...i thought about it and i enjoyed this very much!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-01-22 08:33 PM

Well written, Robert!

Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

5 posted 2001-01-22 08:48 PM

Wanderer, rascalx, doreen and Denise....

I am in such good thinking company.

Dream on and on and on.

Robert

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2001-01-27 01:35 PM

...and I'm STILL thinking..

... Nicely done, just Robert "without an initial"...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-01-27 02:51 PM

Your work is fluid also! I enjoyed this very much.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

8 posted 2001-01-28 04:17 PM

Thank you Nan and Irish!!!!

I'm a fluid dude....

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-01-28 06:45 PM

quote:
standing at the shore of change
                 pondering this sure-footed existence
                 on solid ground melting away into
                 a fluid new world.

the come and go of this line is wonderful!

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

10 posted 2001-01-29 10:38 AM

Thank you very much sunshine...but believe me... it was much more wonderful to experience it than to write it.

Robert

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