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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-22 05:14 PM



Tanka Much Margie


Okay I’ll try this
But I know it won’t be bliss
Tanka much Margie
How can you do this for fun?
Ouch let in the poor old sun

This is not my game
I can not recall my name
Tanka much Margie
A cuppa is what I need
Oh Tanka plant the B seed

I know this has rhyme
But I do it all the time
Tanka much Margie
A break for my tired old back
Oh think I’ll Tanka the sack

How many of these
They are such a breeze
Tanka much Margie
Set me free release me now
Oh Tanka I now know how


Marsha

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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-23-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-01-22 06:15 PM


Marsha~ This is great!  ~ SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-23 01:14 AM


Mushy,
you are amazing! And now for the next challenge.....drum roll.....trumpet fanfare....ta dad dad daaah....just kidding! take a break... I'll be back we haven't even touched on pantoums...palindromic verse....vilannelles....sonnets....yenkas
dream on
Kethry


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3 posted 2001-01-23 01:17 AM


Cool write, Marsha!!!    I can't wait to see what you set your hand to next

Pepper
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4 posted 2001-01-23 01:58 AM


Girl Girl Girl...just look at you go...challenges become you
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5 posted 2001-01-23 06:36 AM


MsMarsha~

Delightful you are
And much too witty by far
So eager to learn
With Passions flame you do burn
Now you have just earned a STAR

~*Marge*~




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Charisma
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6 posted 2001-01-23 07:23 AM


Marsha I agree with Marge....you truly earn a Star.....wonderful done...I love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2001-01-23 12:22 PM


Circe love, thank you so muchly, this is me growing and stretching some more. As you can see my team of tutors, a k a slave drivers, have got me doing all sorts, and Oh my! What ‘fun’ it is. Refined torture, I swear! Why are these things so wretchedly hard love, that’s what I want to know? Anyway thank you so much, and don’t encourage them by saying you like it, they’ll make me do more! (Now I sound like Oliver Twist!)
Take care, love
                       Mushy
                                          

Kethry love, you are incorigible, they all sound like a trip to the dungeon to me! Anyway love didn’t we have a deal, if I supported and clapped madly, weren’t you going to do my challenges for me? (Smug smile on my face because it looks like I can get out of work free!) Mmmm! Anyway love, you know I thank you, even if I do moan constantly! It’s my way dear heart, I wouldn’t like you to forget me love!! Ha chance would be a fine thing! I know.
Speak to you soon love
Take care, as always love
                                           Mushy

Pepper love, for Lords sake don’t encourage them, they’ll think I enjoy it or something like that. Thank you as always love, you always manage to make me smile.
Take care
                                       Mushy
                                          
Margie girl, now you tell them you did this, because you know you did dear heart. A star? No you know what I really want,   a chest to pin it on! Not my chest that’s big enough another chest. Thanks sweetie as always
Tanka muchly Margie
Love and stuff
                                          Mushy
                                            
Charisma thank you so muchly as always you encourage me to fly high and strong. Thank you truly
Take care, love
                                         Mushy
  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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