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Caramel Eyes..(Senryu)
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Caramel Eyes..(Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Caramel Eyes Capitivatingly your soft sweet caramel eyes always pull--pull me Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Not only do I LOVE it ... it makes me h u n g r y ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I admire this form so much..and you do it so well...I know someone with caramel eyes--and you've described the effect beautifully! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O, O, I know a brown-eyed girl that this will please so! Now...green! [Hey, if'n you're going to do requests, I mean, what the hey!] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it.....and makes me smile. wonderful done my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love the caramel eyes..i have never heard of that before..very romantic Poeminister ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thank you all! Glad you liked. Poeminister |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful, and sweet! So very lovely! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well..this brown eyes is smiling .. thank you poet sir  well done imagery and emote jm Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
another one i enjoyed... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM this is wonderful.......made my brown eyes light up -SEA |
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