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Passions Voice
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0 posted 2001-01-22 01:23 PM


Open my heart again
Like you did back then
Like a gift from above
Share with me your love

Open my heart again
Make me remember when
When our love was new
And only me and you

Open my heart again
Help me with this pen
Help the ink to flow
Please, my love, don't go

Open my heart again
Like you did back then
And once again you'll see
The only love for you is me




passion is life. . . ~Diana


© Copyright 2001 Diana Athena - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-22 01:45 PM


PassionsVoice~
Such a lovely plea ~
Nice to see your smiling self here.
~*Marge*~


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Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-22 01:51 PM


wonderful loving piece.....love it.

Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2001-01-22 03:36 PM


Very heartfelt write my friend.  Time will hold all the answers for you and I know that you are strong enough and have enough will to see it through and make all those things happen that you so well deserve.  Loved the write and nice to see your name in here again.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Kethry
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4 posted 2001-01-22 03:59 PM


Passions Voice,
nice write, good to see you here again.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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5 posted 2001-01-22 06:38 PM


please allow me to welcome you back as well PV. . . wonderful one from you here. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2001-01-22 11:44 PM


sincere poem of longing and memories PV ...
we heal as we write, as we express ...
well done, nice to see your name here
take care
jm

Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

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7 posted 2001-01-23 05:53 PM


very nice.loved this.
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