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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
The river flows rapidly, Waves surging high, Lightning flashes, Thunder rages, Nature on a high, See her swallow up the silence, So silent, but now loud, She rumbles, Skies darken massively, Stealing all the blue, Yet beauty is still felt, Mountains standing tall, Peace is still to come, After the storms have passed, Serenity will come, To behold such beauty As the storm dances, across the skies, Suddenly as quickly As she came, She leaves, Flowers begin to bloom, Birds sing, Children run and play, For once again nature, Is at peace, as the river flows calmly once again, Around the bend, On it's journey, Into another day. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely done. Truly enjoyed reading your poetry. |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I read this poem in two ways. One being you find beauty in the weather no matter what season it is and the other is your making some changes in your life. Either way this is a very nice writing. Mr.Magoo |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you Mike thought you would enjoy as we both conveyed our feelings with nature, I was just talking about in general nature, I guess you could see it either way though thank you Mr. Magoo, maybe your right in the instance of change I've been sick lately I guess I'm feeling better so maybe this is the calm after the storm. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosebud, Beautiful writing here, very much enjoyed, I am very much a nature fan, thank you for the read. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful piece....really enjoyed reading these lovely gem. excellent penned. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Skies darken massively, Stealing all the blue, Yet beauty is still felt, Mountains standing tall, Peace is still to come, After the storms have passed, Serenity will come, To behold such beauty As the storm dances, across the skies, ================== RB the imagery in this is excellent ... your poetic mix of the elements of nature and the emotions worked perfectly well done writing ( and I liked the beauty and forces of nature were called "she")  take care jm Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thank you so much Cerenity, nature is exquisite and so devine in so many ways can't help but write of it. Charisma, thank you I appreciate that you enjoyed it, I do find that nature has a beauty that is hard to describe at times. I was trying to give her a human characteristic. Janet Marie of course with the magnitude of a storm has to be a woman we can be vicious at times. hehe |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I soooo loved this. I am so into nature poems. This is wonderful!  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ I thought I heard thunder in here somewhere ! LOL ! This is just stunning ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Saunni,thank you nature brings out so much beauty, Marge you did hear thunder! And it was on a roll....... lol. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Even Mother Nature has to stretch once in awhile. The title alone was enough to draw me in and when I saw your name next to it I knew I was in for a treat and a treat it was. Loved the images in this one dearly and the vision you hold leaves no doubt that you see where the beauty of nature truely lies. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Mark Thank you so much, I also enjoy reading your poetry, there is something about nature to calm the soul. Just the serene skies at times relaxes my mind. |
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