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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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May I whisper Soft, by the flame Through most revered Of Poet’s name Recorded time Records a few May the chords Be sung anew Recorded time A piece is mine Must it be true We number few The fork and knife That feeds my life Is in the sink Just let me think Sleep is vain It clouds my brain Thirst is worse A needful curse The page is long It is my fight The drink will fill Every night Follow me From behind You may see In my mind There’s a whole Not a hole You can see Inside my soul Now I’m freed My pen will bleed The Poet's name. We are the seed Hatched be none Born from night Looking down Upon my plight Guide my pen It’s all for You I can’t believe We number few [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ What a charming read. 'Now I’m freed My pen will bleed The Poet's name We are the seed' Yes, we are ! Long may we prosper and be heard. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx Marge yuh I know this could have been alot better I see but I was just musing and loving having a place to share |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
WoW, I stand with Marge on this one, lovely flow,as muses go, this one left my heart aglow. Write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have such amusing muse... and a place here always to share it..  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Walt, very nice write... very soft... bet it read's great aloud.  Parker |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
heh heh....I think we number quite a few, anymore! This likes me a lot WOW...and you knew it would! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I like this and will read it often. Into my library you go. ME |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you nan for being my booster and thanks for the rest of you giving it a shot |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Now I’m freed My pen will bleed The Poet's name. We are the seed Oh Walty, WOW keep writing my dear, keep writing. Maree |
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