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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-01-21 09:57 PM

I remember the sapphires in your eyes
when you saw me laying there
waiting for you to walk into the room
black lace in a candlelight affair
I invited you with a French kiss
yes, you were my sweet Pierre

The brilliant sparkle in your eyes
reflected blue topaz in mine
fragrance of long stem roses
and clarity of Chardonnay wine

Your necklace of sweet kisses
forever I will where
your silhouette like a cameo
engraved in depths of my heart
the sapphire in your eyes
like rare gems, a work of art

When you bid adieu
our love we had finally shared
my love you took with you
the band of my soul I had bared

I kissed softly, sweet moist lips
delicious as a Bartlett pear
alone in a romantic setting
like a diamond solitaire

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-21-2001).]

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

1 posted 2001-01-21 10:10 PM

Wow, pretties. I like precious stones!

Very beautiful poem.

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-01-21 10:12 PM

You used an excellent theme to express the loss of a dynamic lover. Well penned with great imagery, rhyme and flow~

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

3 posted 2001-01-21 10:13 PM

Wow,
This is a very sensuous writing.
If I weren`t Married,Well I`d....never mind.
Very Nice.
Mr.Magoo

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

4 posted 2001-01-21 11:08 PM

i am speechless. *claps*
love ya
jesse

True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-01-22 01:52 AM

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When you bid adieu
our love we had finally shared
my love you took with you
the band of my soul I had bared
_____________________________________________

Oh Victoria, this is such a sweet write PoetFriend...
I'm smiling at the exquisite expression you have penned here...
Thank you for an enjoyable read
*~coco~*

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-01-22 03:08 AM

and these is a precious gem....wonderful penned...lovely piece.

((hugs))
Charisma

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2001-01-22 03:20 AM

Truely beautiful words and expressions of your heart. Your poems(gems) are shining brightly these days and so are the feelings behind them. Wonderful piece you have given us once again.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2001-01-22 11:51 AM

Thank you poetic enchantress..im happy
you enjoyed my words..

Melissa ..it was fun writing..thanks for
peeking in

Mr.Magoo..ha..yes never mind haa..thanks
Mr Magoo for visiting.

Hi Jesse..thank you..nice of you to say

Coco..thanks you very much..im happy
to make you smile

Charisma..thank you hon..nice to hear
from you HUGS

Mark..I appreciate you kind words again..thank you for reading Mark..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

9 posted 2001-01-22 12:24 PM

I just had to reply, echoing everyone else's sentiments. Very sensual and flowing poem. What wonderful imagery I wish I could come up with...
Your necklace of sweet kisses
forever I will where

Very nice

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-01-22 12:51 PM

Victoria, you really know how to get to me these days. . . if you keep writing like this, I shall have to use gloves when I read your writing. . . so warm it is. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-01-22 12:55 PM

Victoria--I Love this. Beautifully penned.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2001-01-22 02:56 PM

thank you PoeticKnight..i think the name
PoeticKnight is very imaginative..it was nice
to hear from you today

Sven..you mean take your gloves off dont you haa..thank you sven..glad you liked

Thank you Poeminister..always nice to hear from you I am pleased you enjoyed..

~V~< !signature-->

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-22-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2001-01-24 05:20 AM

Sweetly versed, ~V~

my love you took with you
the band of my soul I had bared

enjoyed very much

huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2001-01-24 05:35 AM

You have interesting romantic encounters...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2001-01-24 10:24 AM

thank you wynter and james..for peeking in....yes james very interesting haa..HUGS

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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