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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-01-21 09:57 PM

A peace of me
May I find
In the world
It’s design

Puzzle pieces
Wrote my thesis
I will always
Write of you

You’re the one
The piece that fits
We all know
That this is it

Please be mine
pay the fine
In this world
Of it’s design

I can’t share
My despair
With a piece
That doesn’t fit

You curve in
Where I begin
We all know
That this is it

May we meet
Here discreet
In the heart
Now complete

A Peace in Me
I will resign
That the world
Is well designed

Puzzle pieces
Deny the creases
For we will love
Until love ceases

Please be mine
You’re the one
Where you curve
Life’s begun…

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-21-2001).]

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

1 posted 2001-01-21 10:07 PM

Very interesting write.
I had to read this a couple times to fully understand it.(only because my brain is stuck on a little jingle that Marge had posted)
Very Nice Walt.
Mr.Magoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-01-21 10:09 PM

Walt~

'You curve in
Where I begin'

'Where you curve
Life’s begun…'

What a lovely romantic puzzle.
I like your thoughts very much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

3 posted 2001-01-21 10:14 PM

That is a really awesome write, very creative and heartfelt.

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2001-01-21 11:22 PM

thanx ya'll too kind really yuh all are

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-21 11:26 PM

very ..very...wow!! i love this one from you walt!! very sweet and tender..very cool!!

hugs, g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-01-25 03:28 PM

I like this one very much, Walt... well done!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-01-25 03:35 PM

"Where you curve life's begun." I feel this way of a special woman I know...James

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2001-01-25 04:15 PM

You curve in
Where I begin
We all know
That this is it

Blooming wonderful...

Love the play on words...well done Walty.

K

Strokes of ink, words, dreams like
Waking mountains make intimate conversations
With my shadow

From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2001-01-27 03:13 PM

It's kinda like playing spoons, isn't it, walt?...

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2001-01-27 06:42 PM

heheh yuh

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-01-27 07:19 PM

it sounds like a Valentine!!!

Kathleen

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