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Please Catch Me
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Please Catch Me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Please Catch Me ~*Marge Tindal*~  Please catch me I'm falling in love with you Hold your arms open don't let me slip through Forever precious darling whatever you may do Please catch me I'm falling in love with you ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well I've fallen in love with this poem. How clever and so cute! It's lovely. I just love the magical creations you come up with  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Now thats one I could cut a rug with. I read this once and then I sang it and it made me sound pretty good if I do say so. Very Cute. Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You know I enjoy doing them ! Thanks for liking. MrMagoo~ 'Cut a rug' ... oh, I love it ! Thanks ... it came in a sing-songy way ! So glad to know you enjoyed singing it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge......fabulous lovely write....love it. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sweetie, a treat for me to read this gem from your pen in crimson hue... A lovely write dearPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent. I love this muchly. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I DO love the way you pen a love poem I DO I DO I DO! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very cute write, Marge! I love it! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Thanks, hon. Dani~ Just a little fluff ! Glad you enjoyed it. PoeMinister~ Thank you for the smile you leave with me. Wilfred~ Well, let's just call it an early Valentine - FOR YOU ! FOR YOU ! FOR YOU ! SnowPants~ Thanks, sweet lady. Denise~ It wants to grow up to be a song - so maybe I'll let it ! Thanks, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i hope you get caught.... without any snags in the net.... loved this one, marge! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, this is wonderful! (sigh) I am so happy! This poem was so sweet and romantic! May you fall in love and forever share a love that blossoms, that lucky man is so happy to share a beautiful heart such as yours! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I used to have a pair of earrings exactly like this... but I lost one... Well they weren't exactly like this because they didn't have words written on them...and they were a little bit different in color...I think they were green...and of course they weren't quite as big...after all I'm not an elephant... but other than that exactly the same...I loved them...what does that tell you about this poem...absolutely nothing...Oh ok! I loved this. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...this is cute I really like it...and LOL at Keth...elephant ears |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~  I'm leaping - net or not ! Noah~ I'm glad you enjoyed it ! Kethry~ Here's a matched pair ! Give up the green ! LOL ! Paula~ Thanks, gal. Kethry has been transported to La-La Land ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly truly wonderful, and tell Kethry that I've got the missing one of those earings, and they are that big. Well not totally that big, and they flash on and off. Well now they don't because they broke. But they were divinely tasteless and I loved them to death. (I know I have absolutely no taste at all in earings, but I do in poetry love. In fact even though I do say it myself, I have excellant taste in the arts. This is fabulous love it really is. Take care love as always Mushy  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Watch out for those slippery hands if you want to be caught. Lovely poem my friend. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge~ this was just lovely...full of such love and happiness and hope. great write full of your wonderful heart. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Stop it ... you've got me laughing too hard ! Have you started on your Valentine poems yet ??????? MarkB~ You cutie ! ! Amy~ Thanks, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, What moi? Valentine poems yet, don't tell me it's my next challenge. (Oh my!) Well if it is, stay off all the hard stuff, that's no more paradella do do don'ts, whatever those things are that begin with a T and I've done the Tanka very muchly! Haven't I? which means that with my get out of hard work card I can take it easy, mmmmm? And don't get me doing shapes they don't look shapely when I do them honestly! But this is still a beautifully presented piece of poetry sculpture. And you know I love it don't you! Good Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh what a great peom to celebrate this special time of year ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaGal~ You are ALWAYS challenged, my friend ! And ... yes, I know you love it. Now ... if we could just get whip you into 'shape' .. Hmmmmmm ! HootieGal~ Thanks so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, this is a cute one. Love it !!! Hugs, ME |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I love this, too! Whoever this was for couldn't have helped but catch you I'm sure. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge, these are words to inspire...lovely poem from you my friend... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Oh Marge......!!! If I had a net I would catch you for sure! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ Thank you - and *hugs* right back ! Elizabeth~ *smiling* Thank you. GreenEyes~ Ahhhhh ! Inspiration is such a sweet word. Thank you, my friend. RobertB~ Over here ! ! Over here ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I say this to my husband at least once a week This is wonderful! -SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ah, this is cute, Marge....I loved it...a wonderful write! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you. Nate, my friend~ Thank you. ~*Marge*~ *Checking also to see if the Icon Default works and if the Font Default works. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
They didn't. *This time I manually set them. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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