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- Upon The Shores Of Evermore - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~ Upon The Shores Of Evermore ~  *By Melissa Honeybee* Like gentle waters passing through a windmill two hearts everflow into one, soft hushs beckons time to stand still upon the shores of evermore ~~~ Silhouettes sway in the glow of waking sun, tears glisten upon skin, graced by Cupid's arrow as two souls become one upon the shores of evermore ~~~ We stand, hand in hand, before Heaven's gate a sacred bond, unbreakable and rare, whispers of "I love you" circle with fate upon the shores of evermore ~~~ A portrait, sketched long ago with God's hand, we kissed, as cherubs, wrapped in tender cloud, now man and woman ~ strolling with destiny on golden sand upon the shores of evermore ~~~ Sailing the azure ocean of love our boats chance the silky tides of romance, a heavenly treasure blessed from above upon the shores of evermore ~~~ On the table of reverie, we dine, inhaling, deep, each other's breath, sipping from fortune's chalice, with tongue's caress, delectable like wine upon the shores of evermore ~~~ Drawn close by magnets of divine force we fall ever deeper in connection, drifting on waves of rapture through nature's neverending course upon the shores of evermore ~~~ On love's vast page, we are the ink of perfect words of our soul's fantasies, now penned true, ever as high as soaring love birds upon the shores of evermore ~~~ At the touch of lips, earthly wings, have we, wond'rous crashes of waves play a sonata upon it's stream of keys for a love so pure, so free upon the shores of evermore ~~~ Beloved soulmates, kindred spirits, embracing for life sharing the passions sealed with golden rings, together, as husband and wife upon love's shores of everafter  The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
*emotional sniffles* ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ So overwhelmingly lovely is this piece. A real beauty, full of expectation and fulfillment. So well written. A heart-felt symphony of verse. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
GORGEOUS melissa..loved it and the lovely paintings too...beautifully written  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"On the table of reverie, we dine, inhaling, deep, each other's breath, sipping from fortune's chalice, with tongue's caress, delectable like wine upon the shores of evermore" A wonderous piece you've weaved. Superbly done! Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee...most beautiful! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very magical, and heavenly indeed on the shore of evermore. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much, I'm glad that all of you enjoyed this. I enjoyed penning it, and someday, I hope to give it to my soulmate, if I even have one, *and Melissa crosses her fingers*  Take care! < !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....these are wonderful words of art. weaven with love and penned with grace...excellent penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is truely a magical piece of mastery you have penned and one day (yes it will happen) you will overwhelm your soul-mate with it's intensity and it's heart felt love. Simply superb in all it's form and presentation. In my library it goes!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
MH~ My goodness Melissa...this is stunning...you have brought tears to my eyes with this piece and it makes my heart have hope that those things that are meant to be....will be. "Beautiful" does not even touch the surface of this weave...it's clear that it was woven from your heart and soul as it intertwined with another....Thank you for weaving what lies within~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa, I knew I was missing something...the perfection of your poetry...and now I'm satisfied...for a little while write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Charisma, Mark, Holly and Kethry~ Thank you so much! It's quite the feat to impress talented poets like you Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, I'm sure he's waiting just for you and this poem. . . Beautiful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Melissa, this is breathtakingly beautiful... An EXCELLENT write sweetie and I thank you for an enjoyable read... *~coco~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa this is so incredibly beautiful. The "Shores of Evermore" are just where I want to spend the rest of my life. Perfectly romantic and wonderful. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, CocoBaci and CatalinaMoon~I am so glad that this touched you, I wish all of you the best to find your soulmate upon the shores... Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mel~ no words i say could do this piece the justice it so rightfully deserves. but i shall try my best. i read this piece twice...and both times different feelings hit me. this left me with a feeling of peace and calmness, warm fuzzy (the romantic that i am) and an overall feeling that love is meant to be. you have NO idea how much I needed to be reminded of that at this time in my life. I am very glad I read this, and I also am glad to know you dear friend. Take care of yourself. This was superbly written and surely is going into my library. ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
It would be much too hard to pick a favorite line! Into the library! Since I can't think of anything to say other than I love this, I'll just tuck it away to read again tomorrow! "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Duh...this devil is a dummy. Just forgot to check the library box! "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Melissa, Stunning, how about stunned at its beauty, girl this is poetry simply gorgeous poetry, keeping of coarse Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As you say the beauty of poetry..James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amy, girl-Thank you very much! I'm so glad that a romantic like yourself enjoyed this poem, and what a high compliment about it going into your library, i'll mail you your check later lol! Anikay and Cerenity-Thank you both, I'm glad that you liked it James-Thank you! I'm glad that my poem made you feel like my signature quotation! What a compliment, then my job is done  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mia-Kat New Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 2 |
At a time when one is unsure about love, and life, this brings beauty back into the heart. This is wonderfuly written and is sure to spark the dreams of anyone who reads it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Hey Amy (MiaKat): Thank you so much for taking the time out to read my poems, you really are a great friend! I hope to see you in St. Catharines soon This just made my day that you read this and I'm so glad that you like it and that my words give you hope once more. I'm gonna give you a big hug when I see you again...you rock girl!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, I knew that you were a closet "hopeless romantic" this is gorgeous, your words make me a believer! this is your best poem ever |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is absolutely awesome and touching. I so enjoyed this poem, Melissa, but then I am one of your fans for a long time now too Yes. I do admire your fine talent and skill!Passion,imagination |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Sweet~
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hi, Melissa. I couldn't help noticing the title of this piece, as it is similar to a poem I wrote several months ago, "Sands of Evermore." Yours is oh so lovely. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Chelsea - hehe well my secret is out now Thank you for your constant supportKoko - Thank you for such a high compliment!  Voiceless - Thanks! Love is sweet  Claire - Thank you, I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem~ I searched for your poem, but couldn't find it, perhaps you could post it here at passions for us to enjoy your talent |
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