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Silence Of The Lost.
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Silence Of The Lost. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Silence Of The Lost. Moments alone lost Out of control In the dark of night No belongings, no home Collars to warm Nose dripping Eyes swollen Tears flowing Glorious days, happy times Gone in a flash To the winds of change Fallen knees unwanted Pleas begging compassion Mere silence abounds As the walk to nowhere Begins a thousand thoughts Asking a million questions In the silence of the lost If there is in truth Real love, bring it out To greet the quiet The destitute Let it be harnessed So that the lost Can never experience Silence Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Oh hon, This is just a wonderful piece that makes me think of my life now. You are always writing the pieces that make me think about life. Thank you for sharing again. I just hope that one day I won't be one of the lost anymore. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I always believe that 'to get lost is truly to find ones self' . Whenever I go for a mental or physical strowl into the unknown, I always come out thinking straighter . I really enjoyed this poem, it has loads of depth and meaning and flowed very well . You're very talented my friend . Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your words touched me deeply. Oh, I know just a poem right? Well, not to this reader. Silence to a child is devastating, years of feeling lost is crippling, to the poet it is death. To the person wanting real love it is everything. If someone is silent for many years they store up either evil or goodness or maybe both. Being told to be silent to a child, or anyone is cruel. Being able to express yourself is a gift. Yes, this touched me very deeply. Kathleen |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Lady, There is so much silence out there, and we are immersed by its enormity, but seldom we raise an eyebrow to the magnitude of the problem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, your comments are always so great. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ I'd have to say that this is a feeling piece. There are all kinds of silence ~ Some are welcomed ~ The silence of quietude where moments of thought overtake ~ The reverent silence when listening is an art~ The moments of silence when a hush falls ~ over the earth at the setting of the sun~ The silence of opening ourselves to others and knowing they hear us by our actions ~ Some are not~ Silence imposed by another is a cruel extinguisher of friendships that could have been shared ~ Silence held in complicity of a wrong-doing~ Silence insisted upon with malicicous intent ~ Silence of the words that would lift another~ Silence of the heart of one who is lost ~ Unfortunately, the are not's usually outnumber the are welcomed's. You've provided lots of food for ponder. I'm pondering. Well done, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
To be lost in silence, This is so sad, with no one listening, sometimes silence is also a two edged sword, somehow is words need to be spoken there needs to be just one person there to listen, I to agree that to often so many children are not heard, with so much rush of today's world we need to stop and listen for the children are our future. Very nice poem Daniel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Daniel, this is fabulous penned....heartfelt one my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Angelswing, I hope sincerely that this poem has helped in some way. Thank you. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: yes, silence can do all this... there is a sacred thing about silence, but also a negative connotation sometimes..... thank you for sharing this.... you've written well. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Daniel. A little love would probably go a long way toward healing the pain of many of those less fortunate. Great thoughts in this! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel...I've been away far to long, I had forgotten how deeply your words can touch me...this is superb my friend! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...wonderful as always...I know this silence well |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kathleen, You moved me with this wonderful reply. Silence is something we have all experienced, however, not many cope with it well. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Silence screaming into the night my heart listens....... DJD~ wow, this is great  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, The greatness of our being is unknown to even ourselves. What we do know and feel is loneliness, and when there is solitude circling our deepest emotions, Silence takes control, from ourselves and those around us. Breaking it (the silence) is not easy, indeed. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Rosebud, and Charisma, Apologies for the late reply. Thank you both for your wonderful words. Lost in silence may have been a more appropriate title. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Doreen, and dsnyder, Cheers, and to those lost souls out there, may they feel the warmth of human touch to release them from the shackles of solitude. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, Sorry for the delay in responding. I have missed your poems, and look forward to catching up. Things are a little low at the moment. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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