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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-21 06:45 PM



KFC Senryu


Hey, shiny black bird
sitting on that crooked limb
how would you taste fried


Snow
4-23-00




"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-01-21 06:57 PM


ha-ha-ha-hee-hee-hee

Kentucky
Fried
Chickadee!!

Snow, you are so MEEEEEEEEAN!

Love it!  Absolutely!

LOL

Snow
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2 posted 2001-01-22 03:10 PM


VAS.. lol!!! this came about because I spent Easter Sunday with my two children at the park..and there was this huge black bird sitting in the tree near our table just staring at the fried chicken like it was a relative.. *laughing* and it was giving me the *evil eye* So this piece popped in my head and I wrote it down on the box the chicken was in... my kids enjoyed it ;-)

I'm glad you did also ;-)

snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

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3 posted 2001-01-23 06:12 AM


how evil...
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4 posted 2001-01-24 01:16 AM


Is this what you would call eating crow??  Cute one.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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5 posted 2001-01-24 01:27 AM



Clever! LOL!     I'm hungry now... here, birdie, birdie...hehe

Take care,
Melissa

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6 posted 2001-01-24 08:23 AM


Well stone the flamin' crows what a clever piece.
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
7 posted 2001-01-25 03:37 PM


your replies made me smile as much as I did the day this was written.. thank you all so very much!

snow

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8 posted 2001-01-25 11:24 PM


Mmm, sounds good! Cute senryu.  
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9 posted 2001-02-28 04:15 PM


I love your sense of humor! This is great!
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10 posted 2004-03-16 09:54 AM


*giggle*
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