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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-21 05:15 PM


Touch Me
By: Noah Eaton
1/21/01

Touch me with your words of love
Leave me breathless with your beauty
Embrace me with your love
Share with me with the beauty of romance, outside of our dreams

Touch me with your silky gentle hands
Shower me with your kisses, as soft as a misty spring rain
Speak to me from your softened heart, both feelings happy and sad
Share with me everything, I want you love, I want to make you happy and replace the pain

Touch me, sweetheart, let me hold you in my arms
Breathe with me, darling, through day and night, we’ll always be there for each other
I’ll hold you close to me at night, close to my heart
As we rest together in sweet dreams, dreaming as true lovers

Touch me, my love, you are everything to me
The most beautiful part of my life is you
When I look into your eyes, I see that warm light that makes me feel free
Let me love you, my love, as I will always love you too


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-21 05:25 PM


love the touch of love that shines in your words....love it.

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-01-21 05:43 PM


Wow nice work, I loved reading it, you have a really good theme here . I think it would make a fantastic song/balad .
Thanks for writing .
L.of.L. Tommy
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3 posted 2001-01-21 06:10 PM


Noah~
Just so softly sung.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2001-02-03 03:23 PM


Noah, this is beautiful...you've a tender loving spirit shining through in this piece.
Take care.

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot


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