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Faces Of Love |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Faces Of Love Love has many faces Found in many places Competes in passions races Loves has many faces First there is hope Enables hearts to cope Slips down lusts slope First there is hope Next there is desire Breeds passions fire Lifts souls up higher Next there is desire Then there is heat Makes your heart beat Tastes so very sweet Then there is heat Jealousy the last Makes pain so fast In rage it is cast Jealousy the last Love has many ways Hope holds you sway Desire spices the night Heat brings delight Jealousy is pain With no loves gain Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Very well said Marsha. Love can put us on top of the world and it can tear our insides apart. I guess thats why its written as a four letter word,because it has so many faces. Very nice. Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I like your little study on L O V E ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha Marsha Marsha... less is more... this is wonderful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me like this very, very much, me friend. jwesley |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Sometimes I post a thought without thinking it thru. And the comment I made above about a four letter word was not the right one. I dont think love can be put in the same category as the meaning of a four letter word. Once again Very Nice Write. Mr.Magoo |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mr Magoo, thank you should that be twice? Well thank you a lot more than that, this is me attempting brevity. I have some friends, (Well that's what they say they are  ) who are encouraging me to exercise my wings and try to do some work for a change. I do tend to coast at the least opportunity. Thank you muchly.Take care Mushy Margie girl, thank you dear heart, and you can stop grinning at me, I've done it already. Tanka muchly, oh what did i do to get such perfidious and treacherous friends. And how many more are going to start on this challenge Marsha, (Wasn't that a TV show, noooo that was Challenge Annika, and rubbish it was too) Take care or should that be Tanka care? Love and stuff Mushy Kari love, less is more thank you Majestic Marsha I'll think of something a lot harder for you dear heart. You'll be sorry! Jimmy love, thank you muchly, now I know you won't start flinging challenges at me, for which I'm profoundly grateful, Take care Mushy < !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like the way you wrote this. Wonderfully done and very true in its statment. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just wonderful love. . . but then again. . . it's from you. . .  . . . and you're always wonderful!!!well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Poeminister love, thank you most kindly, this was me relaxing but being brief! I can do it, just not very well. Thank you truly Take care Mushy Sven dear heart, you aways say such nice things love, and you lie, beautifully and very sweet, but still! Thank you love for the compliments I truly don't deserve them but thank you love. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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