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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-21 04:03 PM

Live and Breathe a Dream

Have you ever raced with a dust devil
across the sands of the West?
Or twirled with a twister while it beat itself
against time?

Or looked out across the ocean separating us
and allowed your vision to rest upon two boats,
swaying against the current,
risking a thousand lifetimes,
for one moment?

I was determined to bring you back to me
by lighting the torch at the end of the dock
It's green light cutting through the mist
of our past

Now trace your finger along my lips
and close your eyes ... feel the words
that are whispered in the warmth

Allow my eyes to touch where
the watchers never see
And allow my body
to welcome you home.

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

1 posted 2001-01-21 04:24 PM

Im not going to share the thoughts that this brought to mind.
I will say if one opens his or her mind this could be a sweet as candy or as sexy as Janet Reno in a thong....lol
Just kiddin about the Janet Reno part..
Very Nicely done.
Mr.Magoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-01-21 04:28 PM

Snow~
Just lovely, dear poet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2001-01-21 04:33 PM

Mr. Magoo... thank you.
(i think... **smiles**)

Marge, ;-) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

Snow < !signature-->

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice."
from "Watercourse" by: Snow

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 01-21-2001).]

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2001-01-21 05:31 PM

I love your work, and the way it sways against my heart. I never experience anything less.

I love each word, Neve.
Robert Joseph
~enb~

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-24 10:50 PM

wonderful..

hugs, g

"...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2001-01-25 03:35 PM

thank you both very much for your reply... each one is very special.

thank you,
snow

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