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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Last In porcelained surround, I lay thru window glass, the glean of crystal arms from bending trees and skies the clearest scene Calls to me in heated warmth, the cold of winter blues. I try despite the sadness felt to spring my thoughts towards you. But failing in the fall of words from summers memories a seasons passed, more years than two had felt a fit, with ease. Yet stretched am I beyond belief pulled opposite the more, the empty feels from words unheard what's left, I am not sure. Indifference, silence, echoes strong perhaps, maybe, somedays, Lost once again, in "never shall be's" hope hibernates, delays. Someday, perhaps, maybe I'll see the end to sadness, mine. But for the now just coat me pale with wynter ghosts last rhyme. < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This, without a doubt, is beautiful. Much **APPLAUSE**. jwesley |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
*Is very much in agreement with the above*  ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello nakdthoughts, Suberbly written, as always. BC |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Though a very sad write, it sure is beautiful. You have the knack! Be well ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Most beautifully stated. With 'hope in hibernation' ... let's hope for an early Spring ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Don't be sad, spring is just around the corner.......we have to plant for the gardens!!!!!!!1 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful hon..im looking forward to spring too..so i can open the windows and get some fresh no flu air haa...hugs.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Enjoyed your mood poem. You write well. Sy |
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