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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-21 02:12 PM


Good night


I dream
pressed in your arms
wrapped in safety
warm to the world
hear breath
feel heartbeat
you
guiding me
from the dark
all around me
trust
if afraid I wake
calm
fed by touch
I kiss your palm
good night



© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2001-01-21 02:55 PM


Lovely words, my friend, a heart has spoken.

jwesley

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
2 posted 2001-01-21 02:59 PM


if afraid I wake
                                                       calm
                                                    fed by touch


Stirring and beautiful.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-01-21 03:00 PM


I like this feeling...James
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-01-21 05:22 PM


oh, yes, sleeping in trust would be a wonderful way to rest ! thank you for sharing this with us.

Kathleen



Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2001-01-21 05:26 PM


1slick_lady,
Lovely write.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-01-21 06:08 PM


SlickLady~
Trust is such serenity, once you've got it -
you sleep like a baby !

Wonderfully and softly portrayed.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
7 posted 2001-01-22 07:08 PM


Your words speak softly and the kiss you speak of. Nice write Slick
Rich

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