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vandana
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0 posted 2001-01-21 12:32 PM



             "Still......"
     Still love you,
Will love you forever
   Still ,
There Is time for us
To know,
  Each word we say,
Still want you,
No matter what.....
Still.....
Still....
So many stars are shinnning
tonight,
When we are meant
to be together,
Still closer to you,
No wonder why....
But want to still
for the reason why?
Still
Is so still to be In love,
So In love with you
There don't have to be
Any reason to say why?
Still
There Is time
for us,
There Is every reson reason
to answer it....
There Is every reason
to change In time,
So still to know.....
Still ,
There Is still an anwere for it,
Still.....
So much to understand,
So much to know why,
so much to say it all,
When It comes to you
And maybe
Life Is a still....
When you don't understand it all,
When night calls out for love....
And the love carries away
with the rain,
There Is still for us
......Yes,
Still wait
Till the time
wants us
to be closer.....
Still....

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Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-01-21 12:50 PM


vandana,
Beautifully said.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2001-01-21 01:52 PM


Hi vandana,

You certainly have expressed in the words of this writing many feelings. Nicely done, and I wish you the best.

BC

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-01-22 02:02 PM


VanDana~
Gonna give this one a lift to the top -
cause I love the sincerity of your heart !

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Charisma
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4 posted 2001-01-22 02:59 PM


Still a lovely piece.

wonderful done.

Charisma

vandana
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5 posted 2001-01-23 11:55 AM


Thank you all for your replies it means a lot to me
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6 posted 2001-01-23 12:50 PM


vandana. . . you have always known just what speaks to me. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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7 posted 2001-01-23 01:40 PM


Vandana - I love this. Very much enjoyed.

"Still, Still Love You, Will Love You Forever"

Frankie


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8 posted 2001-01-23 01:43 PM


be still, my heart.
vandana
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9 posted 2001-01-23 05:11 PM


Thank you for your replies
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