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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2001-01-21 11:03 AM


The Optimist's To-Do List

I once was asked, "What lifts you up? What keeps you going strong?"
"What lets your spirit soar? Is there a pattern to this song?"
"How can you be an optimist, when life is wearing thin?"
I had to smile, for truly there's a pattern from within.

The recipe is simple, just a ritual or two,
It's something that I follow even days I'm feeling blue,
You see, each day is up to me, I "choose" how it will go,
A mental list tucked in my mind, will help to make it so.

*** 1. Take some time to rejuvenate your soul ***

My first is in the waking, soothing music to begin,
I rise before the dawn and say a prayer of thanks within;
I take an hour to myself before the world awakes,
A cup of tea, some poetry, the rest of life can wait.

*** 2. Greet the world with a smile ***

And when the house awakens, I will greet them with a smile,
I've had my time for "me" and now can focus for awhile,
I welcome them with cheery thoughts, and send them on their way,
For final words in morning hours, will last throughout the day.

*** 3. Treat your fellow man with respect ***

The morning drive can be a chore if not prepared, but then,
Each time that someone cuts me off, my mental list kicks in;
Instead of letting "their" bad day, affect my inner peace,
I smile and wave with "all" my fingers ... that is my release.

*** 4. Always be a team player ***

The next few hours set the tone, I give each day my all,
Remembering that teamwork is the basis after all,
I make a point of finding good in someone every day,
Extend a hearty "job well done" to those along the way.

*** 5. Remember your place in the world ***

I watch for all the little things that make my life worthwhile,
I stop to gaze at mother nature's beauty, and I smile,
With so much opportunity to pass without a glance,
I stop the clock and look beyond the concrete every chance.

*** 6. Never take today for granted ***

When evening falls, I reminisce about the days events
With family, I'm thankful for another day we spent;
The final words we say each night must last eternity,
Tomorrow is a blessing ... not a written guarantee.

*** 7. Be responsible for your own actions ***

You see, it matters not that life will try to throw you curves,
When following the steps above, you'll reap what you deserve;
For what you give each day returns in plenty back to you,
It's all in "your" reactions  ... "you" control each thing you do.

So every day I thank the Lord for giving me a choice,
Through all the little obstacles, I really have a voice;
The options placed before us every day are simply that,
A choice to see how "we" behave; how "our" minds will react.

It's learned behavior, nothing more ... we train ourselves to be,
The person that the world will greet, just who it is "they" see.

/Kit McCallum

***Thank you for this lovely challenge Mark!***
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I believe I started about 2 hours ago, so the clock stops here.  
You brighten my day with these little treasures,
Thank you for giving me this lovely idea!
(I know Michael's been busy so I went ahead on my own,
but we do plan to write something again together soon)
Thanks Mark! Have a great day, my friend!  


[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-21-2001).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-01-21 11:19 AM


My first is in the waking, soothing music to begin,
I rise before the dawn and say a prayer of thanks within;
I take an hour to myself before the world awakes,
A cup of tea, some poetry, the rest of life can wait.
=========================
EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!
once again you rise to the occasion ...
and yes Mark is a challenge LOL    
beautiful sincere poem of promise and patience served with a smile
well done Kit-gator
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

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2 posted 2001-01-21 11:24 AM


Kit~
Just PERFECT !
Funny, as I read over your list -
Amazingly I found myself in most of the suggestions ...

'The final words we say each night must last eternity,
Tomorrow is a blessing ... not a written guarantee.'


My favorite - of course !
Now MarkB~ will surely enjoy this one.
You did a bang-up job on it, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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jwesley
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3 posted 2001-01-21 11:30 AM


Great list and explanations of each, my friend.  Don't totally agree with all, but agree enough to know, you know!

jwesley

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4 posted 2001-01-21 11:37 AM


Oh, Kit, this is delightfully profound.  May I take a copy, print it out and share in my world?  It is so beautiful.  Words woven tenderly to live by.
Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2001-01-21 01:04 PM


Step #8---Read this everynight before going to bed so that I know I won't forget by morning.  Thank you my wonderful friend of challenges.  Once again you have lifted my spirits with your amazing talent and set in stone my belief that you are not only the Queen of Poetic Challenges but also the Queen of Inspiration as you NEVER fail to come up with a way to brighten our days.  I am humbled and and bow to your excellence and thank God for your wonderful spirit.
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6 posted 2001-01-21 01:10 PM



This is just awesome, and so inpiring!   I'm printing out a copy for myself, to also share with others.

Take care,
Melissa


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Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-01-21 01:28 PM


Hi Kit,

What a wonderful list to live a life by. Many lessons and thoughts you have come up with.

BC

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8 posted 2001-01-21 01:38 PM


thank you Kit and Mark. I hope I'm not too old to learn. This is fabulous.

Kathleen



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9 posted 2001-01-25 01:45 PM


So THAT's what an optimist does! LOL. I'd always wondered... *G* Great poem, Kit... I give this a wave with double thumbs up!
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10 posted 2001-01-27 03:23 PM


Kit - This is one of the best works I've seen posted in our Passionate walls... Simply AWESOME..
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11 posted 2001-01-27 04:02 PM


I agree with Nan. This is a publishable poem for sure. You keep getting better and better.
This is superb!
Liz

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12 posted 2001-01-27 06:11 PM


Kit...NEVER do I wonder why I like to call you friend....

Awesome fits about now....

Denise
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13 posted 2001-01-27 08:03 PM


This is an awesome and amazing piece of work! Very well written, Kit!!

Denise

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14 posted 2001-01-27 08:06 PM


This is a wonderful piece. Words are beyond me
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15 posted 2001-01-28 10:41 AM


I read your thoughts and stopped to think
at each point on your list
You gave me lots to think about
look back and reminisce
I've good points and I've bad points
The best ones I recall
The others need a little work
to cushion when I fall

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16 posted 2001-01-28 11:07 AM


Oh Kit ~ Every single line...oh just so wonderful.  A most beautiful piece of inspiration, thank you for sharing it with us.  Bonnie
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17 posted 2001-02-02 03:23 PM


Hi Kit,

I loved this a keeper thank you.

Love, Cerenity


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We have to be reminded that He exist!"

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18 posted 2001-02-02 04:34 PM


Hey Kit...I think if everyone followed your 7 little tips that the world would be a much better place to live in. Great advice  

~ Ruth
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19 posted 2001-02-03 08:38 AM


Bravo!
Melton

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20 posted 2001-02-03 09:07 AM


*bravo* what a wonderful presentation of your amazing talent....enjoyed your lovely words allot....

Charisma

Kit McCallum
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21 posted 2001-02-03 01:31 PM


I'm just peeking in from packing for an upcoming trip, and realized I hadn't thanked anyone yet at all here! Ack! Please forgive me for not thanking everyone individually this time, as I'm running out of time.  Thank you so much everyone for the kind and wonderful comments.  

Much appreciation to all for your lovely words,
/Kit

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22 posted 2001-02-04 01:37 AM


Kit, this is a treasure...
A keeper4me...
Thank you PoetFriend for this delightful read...
~coco~


You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

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