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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-01-21 10:51 AM

"Things That I See”

by
Bill Charles
~~~~

I see your face,
with all its tenderness,
and your smile,
as it projects contentment…

I see your lips,
soft as the summer rain,
and your eyes,
lovingly gazing into mine…

I see your passions,
as we tightly embrace,
and your innocence,
when I softly touch you…

But I love your being,
as mine has been totally
enraptured,
by yours…
~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-01-21 11:03 AM

(sigh) What a beautiful poem! Yes, love, light, romance, these are the things we all want to see. You've again written of true love here from your beautiful heart! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

2 posted 2001-01-21 11:07 AM

Beautiful piece!
Such passion in this
A wonderful read indeed
A double reply i don't know why
must have happened when this poem made me sigh!

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-21-2001).]

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

3 posted 2001-01-21 11:07 AM

Beautiful piece!
Such passion in this
A wonderful read indeed

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2001-01-21 11:41 AM

Wonderful thoughts, my friend.

jwesley

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-21 11:45 AM

beautifully written as always Bill..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-01-21 11:49 AM

Lovely sentiments Bill ... what a wonderful world it would be if we all had someone to look at us in this beautiful way. An enchanting read.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

7 posted 2001-01-21 07:45 PM

Bill

I agree with the others - beautiful writing. You should give lessons to husbands/boyfriends/lovers....... on how to be passionate. You seem to say the right words with a great deal of feelings!

Ariana

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

8 posted 2001-01-21 07:51 PM

So passionate, so moving, so wonderfully written. I love it. Makes me want to go out and find love right now, but I think that I will sit and do as insect did... *SIGH*

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2001-01-21 09:01 PM

Evening Mistletoe Angel,

And I thank you for coming by my humble place for a read. Many emotions were looked at inward when writing this. I'm glad that you liked it.

Evening insect,

insect, many passions were felt when writing this, and thank you for your kind words. A sigh is fine, for it comes from within.

Evening jwesley,

Many wonderful thoughts, my good friend.

Evening Victoria,

Your words are always kind and honest. Thank you Victoria.

Evening Kit,

Yes indeed, it would be a very beautiful world. Thank you so much for stopping by.

Evening Ariana,

I thank you for your gracious comments about this writing. H'mmmm, lessons? Well, I have enough to take care of right now. But thanks for the though.

Evening Ladycat,

You are very gracious with your comments, and I do thank you. It's very inspiring to hear ones such as these. And as I mentioned, sigh is good, it comes from within.

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

10 posted 2001-01-21 09:56 PM

Mr.Charles,
I must say you truely have a way with words.
If your not careful you just might still the hearts of the ladies in here.
Very Nicely done.
Mr.Magoo

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-01-21 10:22 PM

Bill~
Nice sentiments expressed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2001-01-22 11:37 AM

Morning Mr.Magoo,

Thanks for your sincerity and kind words about this writing. Steal the hearts of the ladies? H'mmmm, what a nice idea.

Morning Marge,

Nice to see you, and hope that things are well with you. And I thank you for coming by.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2001-01-22 02:13 PM

Very nice Bill...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2001-01-22 10:07 PM

Evening james,

Thanks for coming by James, it's always a pleasure to see you. And thanks for the kind comment.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

15 posted 2001-01-23 11:00 PM

Evenin' Bill.....

This is truly lovely, and romantic....straight from your heart, and I enjoyed it as I do all of your writings!!

Follow your dreams...
Follow your heart...
Let them be your guides...
~~~ Sunny ~~~

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