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Star Of The Sun
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Star Of The Sun |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Star Of The Sun By: Noah Eaton 1/20/01 Brigantines of cardinal light set sail through milky ways rivage Mettlesome thunderbirds of day, summoned by this ol’ mighty sun Placid phoenix ships, swinging aurora grapnel upon spaces sparkling bay Devout light of life we receive, eternal gift given from Creator’s heart, the star of the sun Bronze cithara of life he plays, enchanted crown of light he wears Amidst this illustrious kingdom of the world, in all his Father’s creation The natheless scepter of eternal love he holds high in young hands, legacy handed with care A message his brigantines deliver to each of us, only felt, from the fanlight of his kingdom O’ mighty anlace of light, may you pierce all our sorrows with all your might Exscind the splinters of grief from our fingers, in spiritual excavation Raise your hands in love to this ultimate eternal light May our prayers be answered, may love and light overcome all, with loving dedication With eyes that will shut asleep, but warm heart that never blacks out Dreamcatcher weaved in his mind, all darkness winnow into spaces outskirts This sun never sleeps, seeds of life blossom in the wake of every new day, anyhow Nurtured in the velutinous lap of serenity, flame of faith riposte the pain and hurt This headlight reminds us every day, from sunrise to sunset That we are here, to share love to the world, to seize the day To live this life, ensure us that the more we give, the more we get To step up upon riches ladder, and to shimmer in glory’s ray The candor condor takes flight from atop the wrist of this boy, flies gracefully away Guiding the way to you, I, and the world, the leading of Placid phoenix ships, swinging aurora grapnel upon spaces sparkling bay Devout light of life we receive, eternal gift given from Creator’s heart, the star of the sun |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Bronze cithara of life he plays, enchanted crown of light he wears Amidst this illustrious kingdom of the world, in all his Father’s creation The natheless scepter of eternal love he holds high in young hands, legacy handed with care A message his brigantines deliver to each of us, only felt, from the fanlight of his kingdom ================== awesome imagery here ... very cool writing... lots of unique vocab choices and images. very well done Noah ... beautiful poetry with a message of grace take care jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Mistletoe Angel, Wow, very nicely written. This certainly shows the depths of your thoughts, and the pen that you write with. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ This is replete with the voluminosity of a thesaurus ... ! ! My goodness ... you've done your homework ! This is such a full piece and as such is most enjoyable. My only question is - . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Are you Nan's SON ? ? LOL ! Couldn't resist !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You are quite the storyteller, Noah. From the very first word you had me rapt. Love it ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful imagery.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew Noah, you've got a grand vocabulary here, almost had to get out my dictionary Great read and I'm jealous of some of those words you've used ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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