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Iwritethepoems
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since 2001-01-21
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0 posted 2001-01-21 08:36 AM



Through breathtaking night wind
afternoon breeze
you held me to your own
and led me to believe

you took a tarnished star
and polished to perfection
to shine from up on far
to face a new direction

I write the poems
that others often need
to feel a sense of hope
and peace that they so need.

I just write to honor those
who held onto my hand
and I survived the storm,
to write from where I stand.

© Copyright 2001 Iwritethepoems - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-01-21 08:44 AM


I just write to honor those
who held onto my hand
and I survived the storm,
to write from where I stand.
===================
very cool ...great cadnece in this piece
welcome to Passions ..so nice to meet you
look forward to more of your work
take care
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-01-21 08:47 AM


Welcome to Passions! Sit back, read, relax, write to your heart's content...any questions, moderators are at a click of your fingertips...

and check your e-mail for a special greeting!


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-21-2001).]

kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2001-01-23 06:30 AM


welcome to passions!!

and its nice to know why a fellow poet writes...

hope to read more of you soon

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2001-01-23 07:01 AM


You write the poems "that make the whole world smile".... for sure - I like your entree - Welcome to Passions - You're going to love this place - I'll look forward to reading more of your work...
Victoria
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5 posted 2001-01-23 07:04 AM


Welcome to Passions..enjoyed your poem very much..

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Iwritethepoems
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 25

6 posted 2001-01-23 08:55 AM


Thank you each and every one.
wandering
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 92

7 posted 2001-01-23 07:55 PM


keep them coming..enjoyed this one...hope to see more...wanderer

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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