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Open Poetry #12

Clean white sheets

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-21 04:29 AM

Clean white sheets

thoughts of you in dreams escape
laying here, I'm now awake
dare I stir you as you sleep
tenderly touch your lips to greet
I just lay to watch you breathe
knowing pleasures to be received
see you clearly in the dark
one touch from you would start a spark
place my hand upon your heart
desire consumes me, I have to start
no longer can I now resist
want the fire within your kiss
slide closer to say your name
with embrace burst into flame
your lips melt into mine
another night passion divine
how you make my heart skip beats
as we float on clean white sheets

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

2 posted 2001-01-21 06:16 AM

I can see there is no dimness to the flame between you and your love one.
Very nicely written.

Mr.Magoo

[This message has been edited by Mr.Magoo (edited 01-21-2001).]

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

3 posted 2001-01-21 01:01 PM

see you clearly in the dark
one touch from you would start a spark

Deeply passionate. You express it joyfully.

Don

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2001-01-21 04:15 PM

Love your writing, me friend. This one too.
Lets bump it to the top...

jwesley

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2001-01-21 07:35 PM

Mr Magoo, Don, & James thank you I'm glad you enjoyed. Helen

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2001-01-22 07:07 PM

Very nice flow Slick. Think this is one of my favs. Well written
Rich

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