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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-01-21 04:22 AM


So many mixed emotions
never sure quite what to feel
no proper way to take it
no rules can just appeal

Although I've moved my life on
and closed this chapter too
I'll never quite stop feeling
the "feel" I get with you

I know just what your thinking
I know just what you'll say
"I never want to change it"
and for this I will pray

As close as we have come now
into each others hearts
a part of you is stuck here
forever not to part

So many miles between us
yet I feel it when you say
"I miss you and I love you"
in your own little way

So much time now has past
and then tonight you're here
a visit for unsure time
I'll take it, I'll be here

And if I said "I know what"
will happen now or later
I'd be lying 'cause I'm not sure
if I'd Love or hate her

But one thing is for certain
I've learned to let it be
'cause through the years I've loved you
and however... you love me.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
1 posted 2001-01-21 04:34 AM


'As close as we have come now
into each others hearts
a part of you is stuck here
forever not to part

So many miles between us
yet I feel it when you say
"I miss you and I love you"
in your own little way'

This is so beautiful!  You have done a great job of penning these emotions!  Love it!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-01-21 07:10 AM


But one thing is for certain
I've learned to let it be
'cause through the years I've loved you
and however... you love me.
===============
very cool write here....
love the way you brought this full circle
excellent...
nice to see your name here again poet sir
take care
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-01-21 09:38 AM


Hi Thunderkyss,

This is wonderful and full of emotions, I liked the flow, thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2001-01-21 09:46 AM


There are times in our life when we can't help but love someone no matter wheter they love us or not...unrequited love...you've done a good job of voicing just that here  

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
5 posted 2001-01-21 10:00 AM


If it's possible to sum love up into 4 words, you've done it with..."So many mixed emotions..." We can always count on love for that rollercoaster-of-emotion exhiliration.

Write on, Thunderkiss  


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
---Song of Gesture



Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-01-21 10:29 AM


(sigh) Beautiful poem, bravo! Yes, through time our love for someone gets deeper and deeper through understanding and thinking. (sigh) How sweet! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
7 posted 2001-01-22 01:29 AM


Thank you all so very much for your kind replies and care... I appreciate them greatly  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

8 posted 2001-01-22 01:38 AM


A lovely write PoetFriend it had me in 'sigh's towards the end...
Thank you for the read
~*coco~*

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
9 posted 2001-01-22 07:05 PM


Thank you, Coco  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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