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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
the butterfly's that are in your eyes enhance your smile with sweetness and style surrounded by your hair silk brown that travels down your face so soft as tender winds blow the tips aloft the love you give is why I live when every day of that moment you say i love you I know you do because you can't disguise your butterfly's |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
What a wonderful metaphor with "butterflies", and I love the flow of this. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful! Just beautiful! I'm keepin' this one for sure! Great write! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you know Im smiling ..right?  and keeping this lil gem ... way cool insect ... way! later-groovy-bug-gator jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Insect. Well this butterfly's soaring after your gorgeous write. I never could resist flattery and this sits with the best. write on! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ What a lovely, romantic render from you. Delightful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is a very sweet piece of writing ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Just beautiful! Butterflies fly with love in the air I love the last line!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) How romantic! This is so very sweet, yes, butterflies swoon in our eyes when we have found true love. May love forever blossom between you and your love. You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Poeminister thank you i love the way a woman's eyes sometimes flutter like butterfly's like night-lights in the city it's the flutter with the colour that makes them so pretty snowpants thank you your putting smiles on my face Janet Marie thanks Janet "groovy bug" wow! i love it happy that your butterfly's fluttered in Kethry thank you i'm glad you liked smiling big now Marge Tindal thanks Marge delightful of you to reply hoot_owl_rn thank you very sweet of you to say Melissa Honeybee thank you love always shines through Mistletoe Angel thank you love to get sigh's in replys glad that you flew in to read |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these romantic piece....image of tender love. Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ This is so romantic......so very sweet........just love this one.......into my library! -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Charisma thanks glad u liked it my friend Lois awe! you're so sweet thank you |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Insect* The first thing I thought of when I read your reply to JM's anniversary post is... "he should write a poem on this...a nice lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng beautiful poem"...hmmmm seems to me you read my mind...well then again I hope not or I should be blushing This is beautiful...you words are truly golden and this sings of peace and grace...a treasure to read insect...stunning is a word that only touches the surface of this piece~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
now i'm blushing  think some more about this blushing i think your butterfly's and blushing are very pretty together i think thanks to you for the pretty response and picture [This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its good seeing you back sweetie...thought you got lost...this is a deightfully romantic write |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The view through your eyes is a sight to see my friend...may all you ever see be "butterfly's". jwesley |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Paula Finn thank you Paula nice that your butterfly’s caught this jwesley thank you glad you could see through them you must have butterfly’s fluttering all around you [This message has been edited by insect (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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