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In Walkabout...Tanka
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In Walkabout...Tanka |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
In Walkabout Grey Wombat waddles in Walkabout through a field... stops to smell a rose- there greeted by butterfly who descends onto his nose Poeminister |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just goes to show you how wonderful and beautiful life can be if only we take a moment to give it a chance. Great read and very uplifting. Thank you. |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
 Cuteness! ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Charming snapshots of your thoughts in this Tanka. Delighted here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a smile this brought...I can just see the surprise in the wombat's eyes... well done! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Delightful! So do ya live thereabouts, or have you just visited. That is one of my dream trips, to see Australia. Ever since high school, at least, thats almost 40 years ago. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is beautiful! Nature at it's best Enjoyed the read  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"seeing" is the poets greatest asset, followed closely by listening and feeling. So continue to see, hear, and feel, my friend... Your poem is wonderfully done. "When one sees but never saw, touches, but never feels, hears, but only sound, one knows life, but doesn't live. But when one loves, it's with his soul he sees, his heart he touches, and his life he hears. It's all the glory, and the sorrow, the joy's, and the pain, the fullness of everything that has ever been..." (from Because Of You) jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a perfect picture Poeminister. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
such a sweet tanka Poeminister..and an adorable image too. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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