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Passion's Promise
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Passion's Promise |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Passion's Promise riding on the threshold of passion's promise I wrap my faith around your soul our day is coming soon, to join the lilies dancing sway beneath a willow's tender caress where only you and I will feel the magic and every sigh will bear your name vermilion will blaze across the sky and rain our love upon the world so that every passionate embrace will be a lover's storm until all who walk will wear the colors of true love "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Snow~ this is SO pretty!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ Such a lovely piece~ Full of promise. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
These are some beautiful words, my friend. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I love the words, and the poetess even more. Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'riding on the threshold of passion's promise I wrap my faith around your soul' Great lines, Snow! Beautiful poem! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely write my friend...beautiful thoughts. jwesley |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
SEA, *VBS* thank you! Marge, I'm glad you saw all of that, thank you. LoveBug, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you! Robert...  soft smiles thank you. sp, thank you so much! jwesley...your comment is appreciated very much. Thank you! Snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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