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When, Deer, When?
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When, Deer, When? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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When are you coming back? Mac! I need to have you here! Deer, To get me through the night, right! And desires satiate, Mate! When are you coming back? You are needed here by Keth! Jeff, To read your poems of good cheer, Deer! And hear your wisdom's rite, bright! To pain ameliorate, mate! You are need here by Keth! Don't say to take a hike. Mike! It's not just me that needs you so! You know, All the others at this forum, a quorum Await your poets burn, in turn Don't tell me to take a hike When are you coming back? Mac! We miss your sense of humor and rumor And responding to you in kind, great mind We miss your charming ways, romantic gaze When are you coming back? Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ...nicely done Kethry, great rhyming scheme. I really enjoyed this! (ps ... I'm having a Mac attack too!)  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-20-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Never went away Jill You think I was a pill. Just read between the lines girl And I'll take you for a twirl. The trouble is my name ant Jack But never the less I'll be back. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry,I was wondering where he was myself.......miss you Balladeer........hurry back to us! -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!I'll add my voice to this one. Wonderful writing as always. Thanks so much. Much love and hugs from me to you Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Agreed ! Me too, 'deer'~ A peek-a-boo here ~ Miss your smiling face ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Me Three...wonderful write kethry. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
four, four, I wanna be four.... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This was too cool! Thanks! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, yes dear heart I miss him too. This is soooooo goood love, I really love it when you write like this, it always makes me grin, and giggle. Utterly fabulous, as it was destined to be, because you wrote love. Take care love as always Slushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deer, you see this all these people want you back. hurry back soon! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yeah, Deer... Haven't you been gone long enough? Rumor has it that even Toe is missing you! *G* Great poem, Kethry! How I wish the mighty triumvirate would set up residence in the forums again! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeah, even this cowboy is missing him. Would it help if we all pledged to go and a Spam drive for ya? Then would you come back? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i was wondering the same thing..ha good one kethry.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
See Deer, it's inescapable, no-one wants to let you go. If you don't come back soon you're not going to be able to breathe with all the folk hanging off you...or hanging it on you  Keth< !signature--> Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
.... yeah, i miss him too......  .... hope he comes back..... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I hope he comes back soon too Kethry. Loved the rhyme schemes. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Look another two, this could become bigger than Justin Flux. Hurry back! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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