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She's Sweet Chantilly Graced
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She's Sweet Chantilly Graced |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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She's Sweet Chantilly Graced ~*Marge Tindal*~  Shuttling the words on light parchment quilling that weaves the lace Appliqued hearts in rapture flowing she's sweet Chantilly graced Woven phrase of amaze so delicately is placed across the loom of love in bloom she's sweet Chantilly graced Finely woven craft, an art of heart formed with gentle gracing Quill swiftly travels across such fine Chantilly lacing Wrapped in rapture from a heart so gentle in the taking Chantilly graces smiling faces with the joy that she is making ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Woven phrase of amaze so delicately is placed across the loom of love in bloom she's sweet Chantilly graced" Marge--She defintily is...beautiful piece. Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
THIS....is absolutely wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Thank you. I believe it was scrolled from my great grandmother's inkwell. Karilea~ I thought of you as this one came together. Thank you so much for liking it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge~ This flows so beautifully, and I love the images your words weave. The sentiment is just exquisite! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marge ... just loved the flow in this exquisite poem, the subtle internal rhymes and delicate wording were just beautiful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Purty... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've had this one on my mind all afternoon...it lovingly stayed with me and I came back to tell you so...now I find out I was lingering in your mind when you wrote it...wow... It has a wonderfully haunting, melodic quality....so much so...into my library it is lovingly placed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you, dear. The lacing of this one just encompassed me. Kit~ Delicate is such an appreciative description. Thank you so much. Karilea~ From that treasured chest of nostalgic memories, where you and I are both known to plunder - I thank you for liking it that much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I agree, the flow in this is flawless.....I love it Wonderfully done -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I have seen the signatures in my greandmother's school memory book, and the inticate swirl and delicate hand are amazing...you have made a memory of her with this poem...it is so beautifully done. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, this is absolutely beautiful!! But then again, everything you write is heart warming and I always look forward to reading yours. Take care Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ To share is to feel happiness - Thank you for letting me share this with you. Martie~ Yes, love ... I also have seen the intricate swirls - It's so much akin to the lace doilies my great grandmother placed everywhere. I don't see lace without smiling at the remembrance of her. I'm pleased to have stirred a memory for you. Saunni~ I thank you, dear. My heart is warmed by knowing you read and enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
She is you, the poetess, chantilly graced with woven phrases from the heart. A beautiful self portrait Liz |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, is there anything you can't make look beautiful...I think not!!! write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie this one's so precious, beautiful poem dear one...well penned ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What beautifully inked words are weaved from your pen ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie, love~ If my great grandmother lives in me - then I'm a happy poetess ! Thank you so very much. Kethry~ The gifts come and I cherish them. Thanks, love, for your sweet replies. Tracie~ Thank you for letting me share this weave with you. It truly was sheer pleasure in the penning. Hoot~ Just knowing that Grandmother's ink has been so well-received gives me a special glow. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is beautiful Marge! This is one of my favorites of yours yet! You do so well weaving together beautiful words with pictures and things you cherish! Ah, I loved this one very much! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
My grandmothers had lace doiles everywhere too. I wonder if they knew that we would recall them fondly one day, that they were adding a touch of elegence to our memories? I have been thinking of lace lately myself and have a few ideas bouncing around in my head. Who knows? Maybe I'll write a poem one of these days! Beautiful poem, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ I appreciate your kind words so much. I'm glad to share with loving hearts. Denise~ I will look forward to seeing the beauty you write. Yes, the memories of grandmotherly things have such a special significance to us. I hope to one day leave even half the pleasant recalls of myself, as were left to me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
First off, I`d like to thank you for the kind welcome. You truely have a talent for writing and it shows in your work. Very Nice writing. Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MrMagoo~ You're welcome for the Welcome. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate them greatly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, Marge! Your poems are sweet Chantilly graced too! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
forgot to add to the library |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
forgot to add to the library |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
With grace you lace the pages of your beautiful poetry. Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thank you for slipping into the back pages, my friend. So appreciated are you. BloomingRose~ What a lovely comment - I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oooooh I love this Marge! It just brought such a dainty memory or two as I read.... reminders to get the shuttle and thread out and carry on this old family tradition.... Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! such vivid work Marge! Very very well done!....ethome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Thank you, love. I'm so glad to have stirred a little memory. ETHome~ You've been missed by his lady. Glad to see you back and pleased you enjoyed this little piece of my heart's recall. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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