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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-01-20 03:36 PM



i may not have much to say
i may stutter on my way
but listen to me
listen
i need for you to hear
if i pause for just a moment
please dont look away
for even as you do
i'm on my way back
i'm trying to gather my thoughts
that i may unravel them
quickly enough
before you lose interest
look at me
please look at me
i need to be heard
it may not seem important
but it is to me
can you hear me
can you listen
can you understand my heart
please

-dgvarner


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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 2001-01-20 05:37 PM


OH I loved this one.. for me it is my heart crying out.  I loved the emotion in this.     beautifully done.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
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*Cassandra Roseen*


dgvarner
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2 posted 2001-01-20 06:56 PM


thanks CASSANDRA    this is an oldie, but not so far from being 'today' every now and then...

pixydust posted one called 'listen'..this was my response (once i found it..lol) to her  

hugs, g

kcsgrandma
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3 posted 2001-01-20 11:35 PM


Seems to me you have plenty to say, Gale.  The wise will listen and hear.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

dgvarner
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4 posted 2001-01-21 11:07 AM


oh but i do have plenty to say MAR! it may not always come out just right, but its up there in my head somewhere..and if ya wait just a little minute, i'll get it sifted out! lol    

thanks for your sweet reply MAR..

hugs, g
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"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to where we would think so..."


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Pixydust
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5 posted 2001-01-21 02:19 PM


Gale
And I bet we wrote our poems about the same person. lol But I like yours better. Thanks for hunting this down for me.  
Maybe one day we'll find someone that will answer and fulfill our plea.
vicki

dgvarner
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6 posted 2001-01-21 05:46 PM


  nope..i think different people PIX..but all the same, i thought i'd share with you that we all have the same plea at times..just to be heard  

glad you found it before it found its way to the back page..lol  

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to where we would think so..."

Parker
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7 posted 2001-01-22 11:02 AM


dg, very different write. a call from the heart.   When did you originally write this, must have missed it.  

Parker

Lady Lightning
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8 posted 2001-01-22 02:07 PM


~g~
i need to be heard
it may not seem important
but it is to me
can you hear me
can you listen
can you understand my heart
please

Loved this...Many times I've said the same thing...or at least tried..They weren't always listenin'...     Hugs  ~LL~
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The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost.  author unknown

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Charisma
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9 posted 2001-01-22 03:22 PM


oh dg....how do I know these feelings, you describe it so well....thank you for sharing.

((hugs))
Charisma

dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-01-24 09:13 AM


PARKER..different?  ya think?  (i wrote it a while back..but i posted it in the pub last oct..) i think theyre all a 'call from the heart'..in some way or another..  

LL..yes..hard to get the words out when you know theyre not listening...    thanks for reading!  

CHARISMA..i think we may have all been here at one time or another.. i thank you friend, for reading  

hugs, g  


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

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