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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-20 02:09 PM


Dear One
By: Noah Eaton
1/19/01

You are the dove that swims on the crystal lake
Under the angel hair willows, dancing in my heart
Your soft silken feathers warm my heart, the golden egg
Filling me with your warm words and love, my heart twinkles with thanks

You are the white rose that sings inside of me, drinking the light of the sun
Cuddled in the jade-tear eyes of the garden of my heart
Laced in a gossamer veil, weaved by me, the porcelain spider
I will weave on, collecting all your tears and love as you continue to sing to me

You are the north star that I look upon as I walk on through my rite of passage
Signaling to me, a lantern all so lustrous that hangs upon faiths golden pillar
A starburst breath that warms my conscience, as I hold your love beam of light in my hand
Determinations shard diving into my soul like a Bodkin arrow, as I listen to your words

You are part of the audience, as I share my dreams with you on the lodestar podium
There is never a cost, it’s all on me, 24/7, 100% guaranteed
Under the poppy sun or the alamode moon, you keep me company
As you and me listen together, you melting my heart with your sweetness

You have made me a happy person, as you fill me with cheer everyday
Touching me deeply as I cry of diamond tears of love, sensitive tears of loss and sorrow
Forever giving me something to believe in, and something more to say
You are like a god in me, in which I worship with my love and care for you

My gift for you, dear friend, is everything you’ve given me
All the love and hope that you’ve given me, I give you mine in exchange
My gift for your generosity, to fill you with all the cheer and love of life
May you be blessed with my love always

Walk with me on the trails of life, in riches countryside
Gather around with me as we make a toast to the joys of life
Raise your goblet, cheers, and let us celebrate our lives
On this picnic of friendship, you and me

Dear one, you are a true friend in me
There is nothing that makes me happier than knowing you
Dear one, I will always be a friend in you
You are…my dear friend



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-20 02:38 PM


"Walk with me on the trials of life, in riches countryside.
Gather around me as we make a toast to the joys of life."
This is a pleasure to read..soothing...stirs up my imagination..James

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2 posted 2001-01-20 05:47 PM


Noah~
Nicely done.

This -
'On this picnic of friendship'
gives me a great smile of remembrance.
~*Marge~


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3 posted 2001-01-20 05:50 PM


Thank you for the read.. I really enjoyed this one.  a friend really can be like that.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


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