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jwesley
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0 posted 2001-01-20 01:15 PM



Looking For Love

I'm moving on,
killing the fire,
soaking the flames of passion,
squelching the heat with my tears.
Heartache,
a form of love
expressed outside heavens door;
the heart hurts,
the soul cries;
just as death follows life,
we must accept love can pass away.
Tears stain all they touch,
little remembrances left behind,
tiny spots that wash away,
like memories disappearing with time.
We love, we lose,
we cry, we die,
all in the space of a lifetime,
yet somehow most survive;
love is found again,
sometimes lost, sometimes not.
Me,
I'm hanging on,
patching the holes in my soul
piece by piece,
filling the gaps you made
with memories of the good we shared,
burying,
not erasing,
the bad,
deeper and deeper,
adding all to the whole I have become.
I'm moving on,
killing the fire,
soaking the flames of passion,
squelching the heat with my tears,
searching again,
smiling, looking
for Love.


w.  james beard, jr.
© January 2001




1/21/01 - not about me - jimmy



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© Copyright 2001 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-01-20 01:20 PM


Yes, and James, you will find your love, I have total faith in you, for I believe that everyone belongs to one another in this world, and you have such a beautiful heart which will melt such a girls heart. I too am looking for love! May you find that lucky girl soon! Thank you for sharing, my friend!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-01-20 02:37 PM


I agree with Mistletoe Angel, you will find your love....excellent penned my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

WinterTalon
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3 posted 2001-01-21 12:35 PM


Aww...  take heart.  We can't always be alone with out memories of one.

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


Paula Finn
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4 posted 2001-01-21 12:41 PM


Sigh such sad sad thoughts...but with that little glimmer of hope...hope you find what you are looking for my friend
Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2001-01-21 01:14 AM


Squelch them for now if you must but never give up hope.  There will be a day that comes that brings with it a love that will last forever.  As always, you pen your emotions well and the end result is a poem written with excellence.
Startime
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6 posted 2001-01-21 01:20 AM


*sigh* I totally agree with Mark. Keep moving forward with open heart and love will flow into and out of it again. My heart hurts for your pain. Much love and hugs to you from me.


Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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7 posted 2001-01-21 05:10 AM


JWesley~
Love is all around you -
Reach out and touch it, love.

I enjoyed the touch of-
filling the holes - with the whole of you
Nicely stated, my friend.
~*Marge*~





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1slick_lady
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8 posted 2001-01-21 05:43 AM


from 1 tear stained person to another...........love is out there......& i still believe in it!
Lady Lightning
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9 posted 2001-01-21 05:53 AM


I SO enjoyed reading this...
Was exactly something I would have liked to have written..  
Thanks for the wonderful, wonderful read this morning.. Hugs ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

jwesley
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10 posted 2001-01-21 11:06 AM


My friends of passions...I thank you sincerely for your comments, concerns and wishes...your hearts are truly huge;
but, again, this is not about me.

I write the plight of others, for those who can't express it in so many words, and in some ways I feel their pain as I am truly empathic with them and can put my emotions in the proper perspective before I write, thereby having a little emotion show in the piece...hopefully.

But I personally am not hurting as the piece may show...except maybe temporaily while composing it.

Love, now...is something I experience on a very personal level as well as through the experience of others...and hopefully that comes through also...

Again, you're a wonderfully compassionate group of friends; I wish I could share you with the world.

jimmy





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Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2001-01-21 12:00 PM


There is such wisdom graced throughout these words James. Although we can be saddened by the loss of love, there is an uplifting element you've expertly woven throughout these lines. A wonderful read for those searching for inspiration to move forward. Nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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jwesley
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Spring, Texas
12 posted 2001-01-21 12:09 PM


Thanks Kit, I tried to impart a passage from/to in this...glad you saw it, and glad you saw the glimmer too, Paula.

jwesley

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VAS
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13 posted 2001-01-21 12:14 PM


Oh, yes, hang on!  Well done, extremely well crafted!  Thanks for sharing this one with us. Move on from the past but not from this circle.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
14 posted 2001-01-21 02:01 PM


Hi jwesley,

You keep writing like this, and you'll have no problem finding what you are looking for. This is a really terrific writing.

BC


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