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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-20 12:52 PM




Cloudy face

Passionately face
evoke fiery cloudy flames
shadows of sunset


Charisma



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1 posted 2001-01-20 12:57 PM


(sigh) Beautiful images here, oh, I could see that passions flame myself. Yes, the sun sets with grace and beauty, as we sleep to await the next lovely morning. Great haiku, thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-01-20 01:16 PM


Very nice, my friend

jwesley

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3 posted 2001-01-21 01:57 AM


yeppers.......sunsets and sunrises alike are always filled with passion.  Beautiful Haiku my friend.  Thank you for always sharing beauty in your works.
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4 posted 2001-01-21 05:21 AM


Charisma~
In the setting of one hundred suns ~
not one
   not one

ever quite like the one before ~
God's palette of colors grace us forevermore ~
forevermore
   forevermore


Lovely, lovely images from your pen of Haiku.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-01-21 10:09 AM



Now this is wonderful with powerful imagery!

Take care,
Melissa


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6 posted 2001-01-21 05:28 PM


Beautiful haiku.  Very nicely penned.

Poeminister

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7 posted 2001-01-21 07:35 PM


MA: thank you for your wonderful reply, and it was my pleasure to share it with you.

Jwesley: thank you my friend

Mark: I'm glad that you enjoyed the beauty in these one too my friend...it's not me that shows it, but the wonderful nature is the great artist here.

Marge: indeed and I am greatful for that, that there are hundreds of sunsets and all different forevermore.....

Melissa: well thank you for your lovely comment..  

Poeminister: thank you my friend for stopping and reading...its always nice to see you.  


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