navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Angel of Silky Hair
Open Poetry #12
Post A Reply Post New Topic Angel of Silky Hair Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-01-20 07:38 AM


Angel of Silky Hair

Magic moments fill the air as my eyes behold an angel fair.
Carefully guarding the place where a woman's essence lies
as she releases the magic shining thru my sweetheart's eyes.
She tends the garden from wherin love grows
and opens the door from whence beauty flows.
Every pleasure I desire to know resides in the aurora of her angel glow.
All the softness one man can touch revealed thru the woman I need so much.
One thousand kisses I wish to share await my pleasure thru lips of care.
And what of her silken hair flowing as magic thru the air.
Captured desires as I stare upon enchanting beauty mine to share.
Methinks all happiness could be mine within the care of this angel fair.
And I can not stop myself from calling, calling to this angel for which I care
as I find myself falling, falling for this angel of silky hair.

Jameslee@January20,2001
forthebeautifulangelMichelle




[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2001-01-20 12:49 PM


(sigh) Beautiful, lovely poem! This poem shouldn't had been swept off the first page without being read, this was beautifully romantic! May that girl of your dreams forever share a love that blossoms with you beautifully! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-01-20 03:00 PM


Thank you Noah for your wonderful response...James
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2001-01-20 04:55 PM


James, James, James~
You've many angels -
and this one is just lovely !
Enjoyed the read, my friend.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-01-21 07:47 AM


SBJ ...your rhyme in this is a delight
as are the romantic emotions.
wonderful to see you so sweetly inspired
take care
jm


When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2001-01-21 09:20 AM


Smiling...don't be afraid to fall Jim, I'm sure she'll catch you in her wings  

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-01-21 03:08 PM


Thank you so much Marge, Marie and Ruth...I am so happy to find a woman that appreciate me as I appreciate her...James
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
7 posted 2001-01-21 03:12 PM


Ah Mr. Lee...lovely work indeed. "Falling" sounds wonderful too.

jwesley

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2001-01-22 05:29 PM


oh this is wonderful..what an angel YOU must be to write such divine devotion to your angel...  

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2001-01-22 06:30 PM


Ah, I do hope she appreciates you. This is so loving and lyrical.
Wonderful poem.
Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2001-01-28 05:26 PM


Thank you jwesley, dgvarner, and Sandra for you nice words...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Angel of Silky Hair

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary