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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-01-20 02:54 AM


Different Beauty
Karen Torbiak
2000

As I gaze out at the flat,
barrenness of the prairie world
around me
my mind drifts back in time

A time when the tangy, salt air
had my nostrils twitching
as I tasted of the freshness
flowing into my body

Seeing the endless seas
of green planted fields
rippling forever in the distance
brings the fantasy
of memory closer still

Eyes closed against reality
I transport myself
to the cliffs of my past
where I view
the ever-changing waves
responding to the powerful winds
flowing over their surface

Stepping out after
a gentle prairie rain,
smelling the fresh rebirth
it has given the land
makes me wistful still

Memories of blinding torrents
of water pouring
from skies overburdened
from the oceans near at hand

As I gaze out on the flat
barrenness of the prairie
I see barrenness no more
as it comes to life
for eyes now willing to see




Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-01-20 10:19 AM


This should not be dropping off the first page without attention.  I, too was transplanted from the coast for a time, and remember how I missed the salt air.  How lovely that you have learned to see a beauty, not the same, but no less, in your new home!  Thank you for sharing this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-20 10:42 AM


i know what you mean..i lived in hawaii and i do miss those beautiful waves...i am now on the plains too haa..trying hard to enjoy them haa...especially the tumbleweeds...but seriously there is beauty all around..as i look out at the beautiful snow upon the branches of the trees..lovely write  

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2001-01-21 01:48 AM


It is all in how we look at things in this life that matter so it is best to try to find the beauty in all around us.  Wonderful write Karen, I enjoyed it much.
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-01-21 06:44 AM


wonderful imagery in this Star ...
lovely descriptive poetry
well done
take care
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2001-01-21 07:03 AM


Startime,
having come from a green misty land to a land of sweeping plains,I can relate to this. It evoked such great images.
write on
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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