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Sven
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0 posted 2001-01-19 11:49 PM


*Happy Birthday Marsha!!*

right hand of great Zeus
impart your divine justice
upon the temptors

temptors of the Fates
those who would abuse the weak
and defile the holy

in righteous judgment
speak to us daughter of night
that we may know you

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-19 11:57 PM


Excellent!   -SEA
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-20 12:00 PM


I like these. Capitally done.  

Poeminister

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-20 12:06 PM


She Will Glow!
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4 posted 2001-01-20 12:09 PM


Sven,
   Beautiful. I'm sure she will love this. How could she not?
            Much love, Elise

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5 posted 2001-01-20 12:21 PM


I read the challange that Marsha gave you. I was wondering if you'd get it done in time. Sorry for ever doubting your ability. You did a great job.
Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-20 02:21 AM


Sven,
Challenge well met, but I think you got the easy one, did you see the monster challenge she gave me. Now I have a headache and need a lie down! And lot's of sympathy from you brother sun.
Very well done
Kethry



Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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7 posted 2001-01-20 05:14 AM


Sven love, beautiful dear heart, utterly beautiful. (I was going to stand here with my watch in one hand and tapping my foot!) But you did such a great job I'm satisfied. And tell Kethry to stop moaning, she did  it didn't she, (I'm the one that does the muttering around here) I do a very good line in talk and mutter  

Okay I'll let you off, met and matched love, but don't think for a moment that you can fling any back to me. (I'm on a no work break)
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    
You did a brilliant job love
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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8 posted 2001-01-20 12:40 PM


Like this a lot. Great style.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-01-20 01:43 PM


Beautiful Sven, we all knew she would love it!  Well done, and thank you for the kindness you show to all of your friends here.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


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10 posted 2001-01-20 02:41 PM


well done....love it very much

((hugs))
Charisma

Sven
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11 posted 2001-01-20 11:01 PM


Thank you all my friends. . . and thanks for Marsha for the Challenge. . . and Marsha love, if you think that you're going to get off easy just because you're on a "no work" break. . . Think again!!!!!



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12 posted 2001-01-21 05:14 AM


HAHAHAHA Sven...you tell her....ooops I better be quiet she will be throwing one of those challenges at me
tracie66
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13 posted 2001-01-21 06:49 AM


Excellent write Sven  
~HUG~
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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