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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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 ~Angel~ ~Angel~ Angel, Angel There you are Reaching out for that star I need to share your light awhile Shine it down on me, help me smile Angel, Angel I need your light awhile ~~~ Angel, Angel Flying free Fly above me so angelically Touch me gently with angel wings I need the warmth and comfort they bring Angel, Angel I need your wings ~~~ Angel, Angel Help set me free So my heart will beat effortlessly Caress me softly so my spirit glides Angel, Angel I need you by my side ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful, I love the flow of this. Excellent job. Poeminister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ this goes directly into my library......loved this  -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
By the way........congratulations one your one year anniversary here yesterday it was mine too! Hugs -SEA |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Tracie, A beautiful and inspirational read. Loved it! Elise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Gorgeous visual poem..loved it ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Poeminister~ Thanks for enjoying the read and for such a sweet reply ~HUG~ Tracie~ SEA~ oh WOW!!! into your library I'm honoured CONGRATS sweetie, I had thought about it a couple of weeks ago and then forgot, hard to believe one year already and I didn't realise we came here together WOW!!  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Elise~ Oh hon inspirational.....Thanks for that ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
Tracie - Beautiful and so peaceful. Frankie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Victoria~ Frankie~ Hi there you snuck in on me, I didn't see you there. Thanks for your lovely comments~HUG~ to both Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracie...this is absolutely lovely, whimsical and serene...thank you for your gifts of imagination and vision... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truely a pure delight to read. I always know that when I find one of yours it is going to be filled with a magical touch to it and this one is no exception. Here is to you always finding your angel sitting right on your shoulder. |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
We all need an angel. I think we have found on in you. Your writing is simply beautiful. I'll hold this one in my heart all day. What a nice way to start the day. ME  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very comforting to have an angel in here. Thank you Tracie Rich |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, This was beautiful my friend. We all need an angel from time to time. Wonderful writing! ~HUGS~ LW< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 01-20-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Tracie~ This was so sweet, whimsical, and magical with wonderful sentiments. You chose a great graphic to go with it. I'm sure all can relate to wishing for an angel to be by their side. And of course, I just love the theme - you must know by now, that I just adore angels/cherubs. And congratulations on your 1 year anniversary here at Passions Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, If any extra angels show up send one down to me. A lovely poem. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very lovely Trac...I really enjoyed the creative rhyme scheme of this ... as well as the angel theme... very well done girlie  Happy Anniversary too When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tracie, Truly beautiful, this belongs on a Hallmark, awesome a keeper for sure, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww! I loved this. It was so pretty! Thanks Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear All I'm so sorry but I've been doing other things lately and you know I'm on holidays and all and I still don't have any extra time  I can't believe the replies and I'm sorry that I'm not replying to you all individually but I just don't have much time of late.....BIG SORRY and winged ~HUGS~ to all love ya'sTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very lovely poem ... works well as a prayer |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Tracie, This is a Very Beautiful poem you have written here. Congrats on your one year here and take it easy and enjoy your vacation. I`ll be looking forward to reading a poem telling all about the fun you had while on vacation. Mr.Magoo [This message has been edited by Mr.Magoo (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
From a man that has a fine appreciation for the beauty of angels I hope you find that special angel by your side...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so tender and uplifting Tracie ... a poem I'll tuck away for the days when my inspiration may be floundering. Thank you for this lovely writing ... just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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